Romancing the Pain - Part 17

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (for violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: So I have a late start to uni today because some of my morning classes were cancelled due to some

Comments

[junebuggy01]

Okay, the beginning made me laugh. I loved the father/daughter fighting. It was cute. And then the second part, I admittedly didn't read it all the way through, I kinda skipped over blood, knife, blood, and other words. But the image still came into my head. Then the last part was sad, and depressing cuz they didn't find anything. But again, I thought i was funny because Silvia was about to go apeshit on the bartender!

So, all in all I loved, I laughed and cringed! You're so uber brilliant! :D Loves Mi corazon!

[junebuggy01]

Oh yeah, and sorry bout the stupid strike. Go and demand some of your money back. You never know, *shrugs* it might work. Or just go clock those dumbass profs.

[raven_bard]

*grins* I know all the angst and tension was starting to get to y'all so I tossed that lil father/daughter spat. It's always fun to write DL and Silvia butting heads anyway. No worries about not reading the entire "Pepa gets tortured" scene; I know you don't like the gore stuff.

Glad you I got a laugh outta ya...quite a feat since this story is so angst ridden. *chuckles* Thanks for reading and commenting, hon. *blows kiss*

[sportysmurf]

I enjoyed the banter and sulky Silvia. But I did NOT enjoy the hurting of Pepa. Wah. I was surprised that Silvia didn't tear that bartender apart, but I'm waiting for the blasting that El Gordo gets. Right? Yeah.
*more pacing ensues*

[raven_bard]

"I was surprised that Silvia didn't tear that bartender apart" ~ Yeah I know...I almost wrote her punching his lights out but that would have been kinda unprofessional. *laughs* I'll stop the Pepa torturing...soon. Just hang in there.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. And here *hands you a piece of chocolate* Chocolate is calming. *winks*

[sportysmurf]

If chocolate is soothing, I suspect both our girls will need tons! *munches thoughtfully*
Having to write up Silvia for police brutality would not be at all helpful in finding Pepa. Too bad she won't have time to curl up around Pepa's duffle...

[xejanfan]

oh goodness gracious. i tried explaining this fic to my roommate and she looked appalled that i would enjoy reading it so much. and i do enjoy it, but for the quality of the writing and the visceral reaction i get from your words, not so much the pain and torture. i kind of had to laugh, looking at it from an outsiders pov, it does seem rather masochistic to enjoy this story so damn much... but really what i'm looking forward to is how unbelievably happy i'm going to be when things get worked out and everything is made right again

[raven_bard]

Yay for DL and Silvia barking at each other! *laughs* I don't know which is scary sometimes though: zombie_silvia, robot_silvia or really, really pissed off Silvia. Cuz that woman has a temper. *shudders* I almost feel sorry for the bad guys...almost. But it's gonna be soo satisfying to watch Silvia go all bloodlust-y on their asses.

Thanks for such a detailed comment, Xe. I love how you pick out the bits you liked. *grins*

Oh and why were you explaining this story to your roomie anyway, baby? Oh gods, she must think I'm crazy for writing this kinda stuff. *blanches* Oh well...I blame my endless horror movie watching. Lol.

[xejanfan]

i was checking my f-list while eating dinner with my roommie after kickboxing and literally squee'd when i saw your update. when she asked me why i did that, i had to go all into it. she finally told me to stop because it was stressing her out just hearing about all the angst! *chuckles* it was pretty amusing.

so who would be the scariest silvia? i'd have to vote for raging_hulk_slvia FTMFW! the other two are only scary cuz they're sad.

ok, it's almost 5am, i just rolled over and had to check for replies... going back to bed now! *yawn* te quiero baby!

[raven_bard]

*laughs* Well baby I'm glad I can get you squealing with just the power of my posts! What an ego boost *chuckles* Tell your roomie sorry from me, lol. I'm just one of those crazy people that loves angst.

Raging_hulk_silvia huh? Ooh! Now there's food for thought...*nods* Hell hath no fury...oh yeah that's hot. *eyes glazes over*

Well have a good sleep darlin'. Enjoy your day when you get up. *hugs* Love ya too. :-)

[slayergirl13]

I'm loving these speedy updates. This is getting to be such an addicting story, excellent job! I love the bits of humor (father/daughter arguing) to break up all the intensity.

It's a little scary what you're doing to Pepa. I'm just waiting for the moment Pelirroja kicks down the door and starts whoopin' some ass for messin' with her girl. I'm just hoping it happens soon, 'cause having to read much more Pepa torture details is gonna be really hard.

I love it though, still hooked and anxiously awaiting the next chapter :)

[raven_bard]

It's so them isn't it? Even in the face of a crisis they still manage to chew each other's heads off. *shakes head*

"It's a little scary what you're doing to Pepa." ~ I'm sorry. I'll wrap it up soon...I just need to try to figure something out first.

Thanks for reading and dropping a note. *smiles*

[elisa_trapt]

I know I haven't commented the last couple chapters, but I AM still reading! And eating up all the angst! Though poor Pepa's going through a little more than a broken heart right now, isn't she? I'm just patiently waiting for Super!Silvia to come flying in (figuratively speaking, of course), and kick El Gordo's ass. B/c it's going to take one look at Pepa for her to completely lose it on him. But how are they going to find her...? :(

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* It's cool...sometimes commenting is hard. Ah I almost forgot you were one of those angst lovers. Well enjoy! *waves hand at the chapter* All the angst you can devour. *laughs* As for how they're going to find her *chews on lip* Lemme get back to you...I haven't figured that out yet either.