Romancing the Pain - Part 17

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (for violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: So I have a late start to uni today because some of my morning classes were cancelled due to some

Comments

[girlechick]

Oh the suspense!! I don't think I can take any more!! Just when I thought Silvia got closer to saving Pepa.
Great chapter as always.

[raven_bard]

2 steps forward, 5 steps back huh? It'll wrap up soon...pissed off Silvia to debut in a few chapters. *winks*

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[bluechicki]

*Holy mother of f*** god*
Raven, parts of this chapter were so hard to read, but so well written i just couldn't help myself....
I loved the start, the banter between father and daughter but Pepa and El Gordo, well i hope Silvia cuts his balls off but squishes them around first before she does!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And then just when we thought Silvia was getting somewhere...they get NADA...NADA...*goes off in the corner to sulk*
Another powerfully written chapter...Another absolute pleasure to read..
Thanks Raven :D

[raven_bard]

I'm glad people enjoyed the father/daughter spat; I almost took it out cuz I thought it was outta context with the story. And c'mon...don't sulk! *hands you a cookie* El Gordo will get his just desserts soon...patience k?

Thanks for reading and leaving a commenting. I really appreciate it. *smiles*

[raven_bard]

*wince* Part of me is like "wow I can make readers feel the phantom touches of what El Gordo is doing to Pepa but the other part wants to hide cuz I know it's driving y'all crazy. *nervous smile*

As for them not finding anything; it's the mafia. They have tons of resources and I don't think they're gonna make it easy for the cops to find them. Hell they're wanted in how many countries in Europe? It's gonna take some ingenious...something to lead the hombres to the mafia.

Thanks for reading and commenting btw. :-)

[lenageek]

Oh god, like everyone's saying, the father/daughter spat was too funny! (For some reason I thought it said 'Pepa' instead of 'Papa' and got momentarily confused, wondering if you were writing about a memory Pepa was drawing upon to get her through the torment she's going through.) I thought Silvia was gonna clock that bartender - I was so waiting for it! The poor pelirroja needs to do something physical and kick some ass to let go of the tension!

Argh - poor Pepa! I'm reading this and my hand flew to my mouth so I didn't cry out loud when I read the torture scene - damn you El Gordo!! I'd reach through the screen and kick your cajones myself if I could!

Sooo, when the next update! I'm hanging on by my fingernails here on this cliffy! ;D

[raven_bard]

Lol....yeah Papa and Pepa. Both start with P and both have 4 letters and end with A. *shakes head* I was gonna write Silvia clocking that guy too but I don't think she needs the extra paperwork right now. Silvia will get her chance to clock as many people as she want in future chapters.

Sadistic as this sounds, I'm really enjoying people's reactions to the torture scene; so far it's all been the same. Everybody's cringing at Pepa getting tortured and so pissed at El Gordo that they're seeing red. *laughs*

Thanks for reading and leaving a note. As for the next update...soon. Just uh...lemme come up with some ideas for the next chapter first. *winks*

[supercontenta]

I think I get it. You like torture, don't you raven? Torturing your fans for chapters on end?? Torturing our poor beloved Pepa?! You get off on it don't you?! You sicko. Well stop it!!! Our sweet little fangirl hearts can't take anymore!!

(Actually, I can take it plenty more. Give me your worst!! I'm just talking for the more tender dispositions out there)

Another brilliant update, rave, as always. Do your writing skills know no bounds?

PS: Go demand your money for those canceled classes! For the love of God, haven't they taken enough of your hard-earned dollars from you?!

[raven_bard]

*evil laughter* Ah so you finally figured out my secret. Darn. Should I enter the Witness Protection Act and change my identity or something? *chuckles* No...I'm not doing this "torture Pepa" thing on purpose...all paths lead to a destination, blah, blah, blah.

And of course my writing skills have boundaries, you're just being kind. But I'm flattered. Thanks for reading and leaving a commenting.

Oh yeah...canceled classes. Idiots. We have no shot in hell of getting our cash back...they'll just be like "for the greater good...something, something, something."