Did you hear the one about the snowmen?

[raven_annabelle]

I'm out with a friend, four drinks in, trying to play air hockey but not doing very well. Hours later and about eight drinks in, I'm attempting to tell a joke. I keep laughing because I keep losing my place. I'm giggling now, drinking water as they don't think I should have any more alcohol. My friend is laughing too, we decide it's time to go

Comments

[i_will_not_say]

I like how you show the progression of time in this entry. The joke at the end works well as a way to finish the story.

[raven_annabelle]

Thank you!

[elledanger]

I really enjoyed the clarity and the economy of your descriptions. It makes for a really powerful piece.

[raven_annabelle]

Thank you! I was really trying to stay on topic. I usually wander around aimlessly when I write. :)

[majesticzaichik]

I'm glad this had a happy ending : ).

[raven_annabelle]

So am I! :D

[jem0000000]

Aw, lol. I'm glad you found healing.

[raven_annabelle]

Me too! :D

[kandigurl]

This is so sweet and honest. Great work!

[raven_annabelle]

Thank you!