OMFG!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! You absolutely know how to make it the best weekend in a long time!!!! I can't stop smiling, my cheeks are hurting by now but I can't stop - I just can't! :D
Now this story is.. so very fluffy ;) But: tief in meinem Herzen LIEBE ich das sehr, aber es muss unser Geheimnis bleiben :P)
A very, very cool plot idea and I'm in love with the title! They are both very sweet, but with Denna's unexpected crudeness you keep it in check - and it's hilarious and priceless at that. You had me literally everytime Denna mentioned 'fucked' in any way laughing out loud, because it's just so well timed so perfectly :D Priceless, just priceless.
The last scene: THAT PICTURE!! Awww so cute - I bet Richard and Cara both were ready to faint!! <3
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I'm really glad you did like it! I wasn't sure because it is pretty fluffly BUT I really honestly and truly tried to write something dark.
like right in the beginning when Denna drags Kahlan around by her hair I wanted to do something where Denna tortures and breaks Kahlan, but I couldn't :( I'm really not good at dark!fic and those that I have read are always so well written that I just don't dare to try it D: it just wouldn't be as deep and twisted as I would like any dark!fic to be *sigh*
but you still liked it and that is good! dein Geheimnis ist natürlich bei mir sicher xD
No - it's perfect and exactly what I wanted for that prompt. There are so many fics out there where Denna captures and trains Kahlan - don't get me wrong - I like them, very much so, but I wanted to read something different, where they need to work together as 'equals' or at least not in a mistress/pet relationship. So, it's perfect! I think they have so much unexplored potential still and we need to explore it!! ;) Thanks again, so much!!! :)
At first I thought that this story was a little odd,with this strange type of underworld and all,BUT as I kept reading I understood:A place where you can be naked with a gorgeous woman and provide "services" to one another,It must be Paradice!!!!And I love paradice stories!!!Thank you!
well thank you! I'm thinking that this story is rather odd too but it served its purpose. *evil laugh* and yes who wouldn't like that sort of paradise? :P it's like a 'stranded' version of LotS
thank you :D I'm glad that you liked the story! I thought of the entire thing with the pain and physical contact when I had to come up with a reason why Denna couldn't hurt Kahlan, so what worked out pretty well xD and now that I've started to think about it I am getting into the Kahlan/Denna pairing. need to find me some fics now xD
Squeeeeeee! What an amazing story, I absolutely love it!
I wasn't familiar with the pairing before, nor particularly drawn to it (since Cara/Kahlan are pretty much canon in my head and I dare anyone to even try and tell me otherwise) but this was so wonderfully written that I know I'm gonna obsess about it. In a good way, mind you.
Denna is such a wonderful character and you have done her justice, my friend, with a cherry on top.
Kahlan/Cara are my OTP as well but I do writing about Denna and her dynamic with other characters. seems like you're going through all my older stuff :P and I'm glad you're liking it.
I actually have a modern AU with Denna as my main character on ff.net - just so you know ;)
again thank you for taking the time to leave such lovely reviews.
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
You absolutely know how to make it the best weekend in a long time!!!! I can't stop smiling, my cheeks are hurting by now but I can't stop - I just can't! :D
Now this story is.. so very fluffy ;) But: tief in meinem Herzen LIEBE ich das sehr, aber es muss unser Geheimnis bleiben :P)
A very, very cool plot idea and I'm in love with the title! They are both very sweet, but with Denna's unexpected crudeness you keep it in check - and it's hilarious and priceless at that. You had me literally everytime Denna mentioned 'fucked' in any way laughing out loud, because it's just so well timed so perfectly :D Priceless, just priceless.
The last scene: THAT PICTURE!! Awww so cute - I bet Richard and Cara both were ready to faint!! <3 ( ... )
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like right in the beginning when Denna drags Kahlan around by her hair I wanted to do something where Denna tortures and breaks Kahlan, but I couldn't :(
I'm really not good at dark!fic and those that I have read are always so well written that I just don't dare to try it D: it just wouldn't be as deep and twisted as I would like any dark!fic to be *sigh*
but you still liked it and that is good! dein Geheimnis ist natürlich bei mir sicher xD
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Thanks again, so much!!! :)
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*evil laugh* and yes who wouldn't like that sort of paradise? :P it's like a 'stranded' version of LotS
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I'm glad that you liked the story! I thought of the entire thing with the pain and physical contact when I had to come up with a reason why Denna couldn't hurt Kahlan, so what worked out pretty well xD
and now that I've started to think about it I am getting into the Kahlan/Denna pairing. need to find me some fics now xD
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I wasn't familiar with the pairing before, nor particularly drawn to it (since Cara/Kahlan are pretty much canon in my head and I dare anyone to even try and tell me otherwise) but this was so wonderfully written that I know I'm gonna obsess about it. In a good way, mind you.
Denna is such a wonderful character and you have done her justice, my friend, with a cherry on top.
Thank you!
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Kahlan/Cara are my OTP as well but I do writing about Denna and her dynamic with other characters. seems like you're going through all my older stuff :P and I'm glad you're liking it.
I actually have a modern AU with Denna as my main character on ff.net - just so you know ;)
again thank you for taking the time to leave such lovely reviews.
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