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Sunshine After Rain

Jul 19, 2011 17:12

Title: Sunshine After Rain
Summary: Steve and Gracie have to spend the night alone in his house when Danny gets stranded at the office during a tropical storm.
Characters: Steve, Grace, with a side-order of Danny
Rating: G
Wordcount: 5,151
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine, no ownership implied. Sue if you want to, but all you'll get out of that is a ( Read more... )

fandom flood appeal, fanfic, gracie, h50, danno, charity, steve

Comments 85

le_maistre_e July 19 2011, 21:28:29 UTC

Um, hun? Didya do this on purpose? ....

Right now he has to figure out how to distract a really anxious eight-year-old from the fact that she's going to have to spend the whole night in someone else's house when neither

"You know what my sister Mary and me used to do when there were big storms outside?"

:-)

ratherastory July 19 2011, 21:31:11 UTC

Crap. *goes to check her Word file*

I swear that was a complete sentence at some point!

le_maistre_e July 19 2011, 21:36:04 UTC

:-) LOL!! Just something I always notice... I am a teensy-weensy bit of a grammar Nazi... :-)

ratherastory July 19 2011, 22:00:47 UTC

It's all good. I often don't get things beta'd, so having my more egregious errors/omissions pointed out is always good. :)

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klutzy_girl July 19 2011, 21:29:43 UTC

This was adorable! I loved it.

ratherastory July 19 2011, 21:33:47 UTC

Thank you! :)

le_maistre_e July 19 2011, 21:35:22 UTC

Other than that one small little blip:

*waves pom poms*

*tosses confetti*

Huzzah!!Huzzah!!Huzzah!!

Seriously, I am insanely jealous of your writing and your overall talent...

ratherastory July 19 2011, 22:00:00 UTC

*smooshes you*

Thank you! :)

starbuckssue July 19 2011, 21:56:40 UTC

This was just adorable, I can so see Steve doing all this and trust something to go wrong, Grace was so matter-of-fact looking after him too.

ratherastory July 19 2011, 21:59:09 UTC

I figure she takes after her Danno that way. :)

Glad you liked it!

embroiderama July 19 2011, 22:24:30 UTC

Adorable! I love Steve and Grace here, trying to figure out how to hang out together and comfort each other. Grace is just perfect.

One tiny thing: which he thinks isn't bat at all. Bad?

ratherastory July 19 2011, 22:26:21 UTC

Thank you so much! It's a dynamic I hadn't explored yet, and now I'm weirdly enamoured.

No, no, I totally meant bat. How else is Steve going to be Batman? *facepalm* Gonna go fix that, brb.

le_maistre_e July 19 2011, 22:43:57 UTC

See? I can't be that bad of a Nazi. I didn't even notice that one... :-)

ratherastory July 19 2011, 22:45:42 UTC

*cough*

Notice what? That typo was never there. *Jedi mind-trick*