A Thousand Words

[ratherastory]

Title: A Thousand Words
Prompt/Summary: Written for the third challenge of Round 1 at spn_las. The prompt was: Who knew an Impala could fly?
Characters: Lucas Barr
Rating: G
Wordcount: ~800
Disclaimer: It occurred to me that my belief that it all belongs to me might, in fact, be erroneous when Sera threw that holy water at me...
Warnings: None
Neurotic

Comments

[tifaching]

Your cut is messed up!

Now on to more important matters. I have to admit I didn't vote this round. I was on vacation and just getting my story written and posted took up all the time I wanted to spend on a computer. I managed to read all the stories after I got home this afternoon and if I HAD voted, your story would have had an extra vote. This was amazing. I loved the outside perspective from Lucas and that last line was a killer. Great job!

[ratherastory]

Fixed now! And thank you so much. I really liked that episode of SPN: Lucas and Andrea and the sherriff were particularly compelling characters for me, so I had fun exploring it all with an outsider POV.

[ratherastory]

*beams*

Thank you! For some reason writing small children is both easy and hard if you want to do it justice.

I'm glad you liked it!

[glimmerella]

I chose this one as my favorite, so you'll get it emailed to you.

[ratherastory]

*bounce*

Thanks! It's much appreciated!

[claudiapriscus]

You should be proud! This is marvelous.

[ratherastory]

Thank you! I am quite pleased with how it turned out.

[idc_chan]

I also voted for yours. :) I loved your Lucas, and I loved how you used the prompt. You have every reason to be proud of this one, it was incredibly well done. The end packs a wonderful emotional punch and I loved the description of the crayons in the beginning. The title was perfect as well.

[ratherastory]

Thank you so much! :)

There were so many great stories this time around, I feel I'm in very good company.