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A Thousand Words

Sep 19, 2010 22:02

Title: A Thousand Words
Prompt/Summary: Written for the third challenge of Round 1 at spn_las. The prompt was: Who knew an Impala could fly?
Characters: Lucas Barr
Rating: G
Wordcount: ~800
Disclaimer: It occurred to me that my belief that it all belongs to me might, in fact, be erroneous when Sera threw that holy water at me...
Warnings: None
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fanfic, a thousand words, spn_las, secondary characters rule!, challenge

Comments 33

harrigan September 20 2010, 03:34:29 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ !

ratherastory September 20 2010, 03:39:54 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ right back at you!

debbiel66 September 20 2010, 04:11:05 UTC

I loved this!

ratherastory September 20 2010, 04:15:42 UTC

Thanks!

Always nice to hear. :)

borgmama1of5 September 20 2010, 04:59:04 UTC

Damn last line! Was all set for upbeat and then you reversed it so fast! Which actually was quite a feat, but still...

ratherastory September 20 2010, 05:09:09 UTC

Apparently I have an unwritten rule that all SPN fics must contain at least some angst. ;)

Glad you liked it!

lavinialavender September 20 2010, 05:34:37 UTC

The tip is still sharp, which is good, because he needs it sharp to draw the precise lines of the big black car.
Aw!

Last line HURTS, though. D:

Very nice piece for a minor character, though.

ratherastory September 20 2010, 06:31:33 UTC

Thank you! :)

The last line kind of was a killer, but it was the only way I could work a flying Impala into the mix.

Glad you liked it!

primrose_1 September 20 2010, 10:50:31 UTC

You always get me on the last lines! What a unique way to fill the prompt! I love it!

ratherastory September 20 2010, 18:16:43 UTC

Like Chuck said, endings are hard. I hate reading a really good fic that just fizzles at the end because the author didn't know how to finish it. The shorter the story, the more punch the last line should pack, at least as far as I'm concerned. In short, I'm glad you liked it! :)