Only Kin Could Slice So Deep (Chapter 1)

[rata_toskr]

Title: Only Kin Could Slice So Deep
Chapter 1: Paranoia
Pairings: None (this part);[Fic Pairing]Kíli/Bilbo
Warnings: offscreen torture, angst, unreliable narrator

Word Count: 5141Disclaimer: If I owned the hobbit, I wouldn't have to write fanfic
Summary: Thorin believes that his nephew betrayed the company in the goblin caves and leaves him there to die; Bilbo

Comments

[yersi_fanel]

This is so very interesting but it hurts! oh Thorin, that paranoia of yours was the flame that set things ablaze.

Very good! I'll follow this, even I'm not used to the paring :)

[rata_toskr]

Thanks for reading (especially if it's not what you normally go for)- and yeah Thorin really doesn't come out too well.

Things are actually going to be pretty dark for awhile, my angst tends to be quite angsty and this prompt was designed to make people cry.

[sra_danvers]

OMG!!! Kíli, noooo!!! *hating Thorin*

[rata_toskr]

Well in the last long story Fili was a dick and this time I guess it's Thorin's turn.

[sra_danvers]

That's good, not always being the bad boy...

[rata_toskr]

Yeah, I have to have some variety, right?

Although while Fili isn't the bad guy he's definitely going to be unhappy for a bit, but then again everyone is going to be unhappy so that's more of a general thing.

[anonymous]

I love this amazing story and you are a fantastic writer! I can't wait to read the next chapter whenever it comes out, which I hope is soon!

[rata_toskr]

Thank you very much. It's actually a little farther ahead on the meme already, since I post there every time I finish a section and here only when I finish a chapter.

[dagorwen]

*sadface*

[rata_toskr]

Yeah it's going to be one of those stories...