Kili/Bilbo, torture, rescue, BAMF!BilbomissisjokerDecember 23 2012, 09:41:55 UTC
The troll king makes good on his promise to torture the youngest dwarf- and he chooses correctly this time- Kili is taken to prison and tortured endlessly, but he never gives in or gives up, and never speaks one word to trolls. In fact, he doesn't speak at all, just screams
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Re: Kili/Bilbo, torture, rescue, BAMF!Bilborata_toskrMarch 17 2013, 22:36:31 UTC
I actually am working on a fill for this (yes 4 months later), but it may be quite awhile since I currently have too many WIPs and fics I just need to type up.
Are you okay if it isn't Gandalf who reveals it though? because I have a whole attempted assassination scene I want to write. And Bilbo may also be angsty because somehow the Shire turned homophobic in this story, idk my fills seem to have minds of their own. So it's less BAMF Bilbo and more he's just doing what needs to be done, despite being terrified.
Re: Kili/Bilbo, torture, rescue, BAMF!BilbomissisjokerMarch 18 2013, 07:01:25 UTC
I don't really care who reveals the truth- I just want tortured!Kili and BAMF!Bilbo saving him and lots of angst on Fili's and esp. Thorin's part since he actually believed Kili could betray him. And, of course, happy ending!
Re: Kili/Bilbo, torture, rescue, BAMF!Bilborata_toskrMarch 18 2013, 14:14:22 UTC
Well I can probably manage something close to that. There'll just be angst on everyone's part. So when I finally get my act together and finish it I'll post it here.
Re: Question for the OPmissisjokerApril 2 2013, 06:42:19 UTC
I'm ok with any killings as long as Kili, Fili, Bilbo and Bofur survive (yes, I have a weakness for DurinBros, and Bilbo and Bofur are waaay to cute to die). Other than that- go wild. About Thorin- well, he might be as dicky as he wants but I kinda believe that Kili will forgive him anyway (he is royal too, he understands duty, etc).
Re: Question for the OPrata_toskrApril 2 2013, 14:53:19 UTC
All right then, I guess Fili won't be dying tragically in anyone's arms- though I suppose he could always just pass out tragically instead. We'll see how it goes, my stories often end up places I don't expect but I should be able to keep it within those parameters.
No guarantees on the forgiveness though unless you really want that- I can actually see Kili forgiving Thorin leaving him behind because of duty and all that, I'm just not sure he'd forgive the pain it caused Fili.
Re: Question for the OPmissisjokerApril 2 2013, 16:33:12 UTC
Tragically passing out works for me :p
Well, if it is Fili who is suffering because of Thorin0 oh, that is completely another story! I do think that Kili can take lots of sh@t from Thorin or anyone else and still brush it off / forgive if it is only concerning him- but when it touches his brother he will go berserk. And- just my personal opinion- between Thorin and Fili, Kili will chose Fili if it comes to that.
And- no worries! Unexpected turns are the best!
And I'll be sending you rays of inspiration from now on (when I am not sleeping, of course :) )
Only Kin Could Slice So Deep, 1b/?rata_toskrMarch 29 2013, 01:50:06 UTC
While his anger made him somewhat harsh with Mr. Baggins, the halfling was clearly unsuitable for facing down a dragon and Thorin had enough things working against him without adding a millstone around his neck. The wizard's insistence that this must be his burglar actually made the dwarf wonder briefly if Gandalf could be the foe lurking in the shadows, but he shook that suspicion firmly from his mind
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Only Kin Could Slice So Deep, 2a/?rata_toskrMarch 29 2013, 16:44:58 UTC
However, while the rest of the company became caught up in the joys of traveling and the hopeful spirit of their quest, Thorin's worries would not leave his mind. He brooded on them as they rode and his dreams were filled with dragon fire and a malevolent shadow laughing from the dark. The thought that his quest might fail only due to some traitor's machinations was unthinkable and the idea that he might succeed only to lose his people to another ate at his tattered pride
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Only Kin Could Slice So Deep, 2b/?rata_toskrMarch 29 2013, 16:45:47 UTC
Thus as the dwarves and hobbit climbed high into the Misty Mountains, Thorin found himself searching his companions' faces for any hint that they were not what they seemed. He found himself second-guessing every action and looking for falsehood in even Balin's eyes, while his uncertainty fed on nightmares in the dark
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Are you okay if it isn't Gandalf who reveals it though? because I have a whole attempted assassination scene I want to write. And Bilbo may also be angsty because somehow the Shire turned homophobic in this story, idk my fills seem to have minds of their own. So it's less BAMF Bilbo and more he's just doing what needs to be done, despite being terrified.
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And, of course, happy ending!
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And since Thorin turned out to be such a dick so far, do you care if Kili actually forgives him in the end or not?
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Other than that- go wild.
About Thorin- well, he might be as dicky as he wants but I kinda believe that Kili will forgive him anyway (he is royal too, he understands duty, etc).
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No guarantees on the forgiveness though unless you really want that- I can actually see Kili forgiving Thorin leaving him behind because of duty and all that, I'm just not sure he'd forgive the pain it caused Fili.
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Well, if it is Fili who is suffering because of Thorin0 oh, that is completely another story!
I do think that Kili can take lots of sh@t from Thorin or anyone else and still brush it off / forgive if it is only concerning him- but when it touches his brother he will go berserk. And- just my personal opinion- between Thorin and Fili, Kili will chose Fili if it comes to that.
And- no worries! Unexpected turns are the best!
And I'll be sending you rays of inspiration from now on (when I am not sleeping, of course :) )
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And thanks for the rays- I'll have a small part up later today and I'm working on the whole rescue scene- it's just taking a bit to get it right.
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Part I: ParanoiaWhen the Goblin King stares down at him and calls him by his name, Thorin Oakenshield knows that he has been betrayed ( ... )
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