I've been thinking about the feedback Spelunker and Fano gave me and I had every intention of doing serious work on the project this weekend but I'm not very creative with a fever and when I did have the time and energy to devote to it I ended up spending it on discussing game stuff with Edward at his request. So, no re-write and no work on the ( Read more... )

Here is what I've got done on the first chapter.

I'm specifically looking for input on how well Heneter is set up as a character, how interested you are in what happens next, if you think she should eventually get involved with Nakhti far, far in the future, and how much, if any, effort should I put into details of the preparations for leaving and ( Read more... )

A new poster at WAS IF is asking about how to deal with a long dry spell and with getting frustrated when your plots don't go anywhere. I can relate. I have outlined, in very broad strokes, a series that at this point comprises 10 novels.

This is scary for a number of reasons.

First, and most importantly, there is the fact that in the 4 years ( Read more... )