Not much fic to choose from but...

Feb 09, 2011 02:08

Stole this from hyacinthian:

Pick a paragraph (or any passage between... let's say 200 and 600 words) from anything I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose ( Read more... )

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julvett February 9 2011, 07:46:53 UTC
I wish you would do commentary for this entire story, but I'll just choose one of my favorite scenes. It is under 600 words, I swear. I had to include those two amazing sentences.

With a sudden bought of rage, Lily wondered-through Mulciber’s obnoxious attempts at sounding sophisticated-if Severus even realized that Mulciber insinuated he was some sort of degenerate or if Severus secretly believed the same.James’ cheeks coloured with contempt, but he simply shook his head. “And I still say that’s the biggest load of tosh I’ve ( ... )

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julvett February 9 2011, 07:51:04 UTC
Oh and wait, I forgot this part that comes right after that:

Agterop’s eyebrows nearly flew off of his forehead, while Mulciber took the opportunity to whisper something in Severus’ ear.

What did he whisper? D:

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