I usually don't read BB fics involving Hyungseung, but I decided to give this one a try and oh boy I'm glad I did.
The characterization is very good, especially what made this story so good was it emphasizing on Hyunseung's emotions and thoughts throughout the story that just made him seem so much more realistic and likable as a character. Like this is one of those rare times I've read a fic and thought it managed to actually portray a person realistically. And the way the words paint an image really add to the feeling. The ending is really sad even if you could kind of predict it. I feel like this was Jiyong's last desperate act to connect with Hyungseung the way he'd never dared before, before he would lose him for good :(
And to comment something on the actual smut, just... wow, hot. A+. All the awards.
Thank you for giving my story a shot lovely, your review gives me warm fuzzies ;3 and you hit the nail on the head with Jiyong, that's exactly what he was doing, even if he didn't fully realize it oh ho ho ho.
SOB GSeung is so rare. I think partly because it usually is sad considering Hyunseung getting kicked out of Bigbang.
This was sad but in a terrific kind of way (of course I wanted to coddle Hyunseung because you write his emotions so well). The part where Hyunseung breaks down sobbing UGH MY HEART COULD NOT TAKE IT.
Usually most BB fic covering the docu have Seungri and Jiyong at odds and then making up. But I LOVE this GSeung because from what I saw of early BB it seemed Jiyong was always sweet on Hyunseung and it's nice to see fic that covers that so well. A++ on everything from the smut and characterization.
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The characterization is very good, especially what made this story so good was it emphasizing on Hyunseung's emotions and thoughts throughout the story that just made him seem so much more realistic and likable as a character. Like this is one of those rare times I've read a fic and thought it managed to actually portray a person realistically. And the way the words paint an image really add to the feeling.
The ending is really sad even if you could kind of predict it. I feel like this was Jiyong's last desperate act to connect with Hyungseung the way he'd never dared before, before he would lose him for good :(
And to comment something on the actual smut, just... wow, hot. A+. All the awards.
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This was sad but in a terrific kind of way (of course I wanted to coddle Hyunseung because you write his emotions so well). The part where Hyunseung breaks down sobbing UGH MY HEART COULD NOT TAKE IT.
Usually most BB fic covering the docu have Seungri and Jiyong at odds and then making up. But I LOVE this GSeung because from what I saw of early BB it seemed Jiyong was always sweet on Hyunseung and it's nice to see fic that covers that so well. A++ on everything from the smut and characterization.
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Thank you so much for the lovely review~ I'm glad you enjoyed it :')
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