[Cable & Deadpool] Good Intentions (1/?)

[rallamajoop]

Remember that other-C&DP-story I kept talking about writing during those last couple of bits of Dogs of War and kept asking questions for? Well, this would be it.

Title: Good Intentions
Summary: Deadpool thought killing that 'Nathan' guy was going to be a fairly routine job. He couldn't have been more wrong.
Chapter: 1/?
Characters/Pairing: Cable/

Comments

[prue84]

Gaaaaaah
*Hakka is currently unavailable*

I followed the suggestion and not started search for the actual issue: I'm sure I appreciated more the story without reading that crap. XD

Really, I'm more and more in love with you!
I hope you'll be able to continue the series! <3

[rallamajoop]

I followed the suggestion and not started search for the actual issue: I'm sure I appreciated more the story without reading that crap. XD

Yeah, this is based more on the general idea of events than their actual execution on page - though I did wind up referencing more details from that issue than I expected to. Even when I'm not that keen on canon, I seem to like knowing what's there to work from. ^^;

I hope you'll be able to continue the series! <3

I don't want to make too many promises about this one, but I definitely plan to! Main question is how far I get and how long it'll take me ^^;

[rizumcbutt]

ooohhhh that was decidedly delightful. *_* a pleasure to read, and i really like your style! and it was at the line... Deadpool eyed every step with the jittery attention of a caged beast. that you had won me over for sure. wonderful phrasing. <3

[rallamajoop]

Thank you, really pleased to hear you enjoyed it so much. =D

and it was at the line... Deadpool eyed every step with the jittery attention of a caged beast. that you had won me over for sure. wonderful phrasing. <3

Ha, that's one of the earlier lines in the fic too. I trust the rest lived up to the same standard for you. ;)

[alternatedoom]

Wade was giving the distinct impression he could do this all night. Or come to pieces five seconds from now, and Cable didn't know which of those prospects he liked more.Wow, this was SO good. Unf. Cable's wonderfully ballsy, in addition to being his cool, calm and collected self. I loved Wade going on about how he was supposed to be in a comic book today, G-rated and heteronormative, not a porno. And how all Wade's insecurities threaded through the whole thing, start to finish. And the sex was great. I've developed a real thing for Cable bottoming, and again with the ballsiness considering Wade came there to kill him, letting Wade at least ostensibly be in control. Awesome

[rallamajoop]

I loved Wade going on about how he was supposed to be in a comic book today, G-rated and heteronormative, not a porno.

*g* I have to admit to being very pleased with that line. A decent amount of my fic makes it off the drawing board mostly because I've come up with a few particular lines for it I really want to use, and that was definitely one of the ones for this fic. ^^;

I've developed a real thing for Cable bottoming and again with the ballsiness considering Wade came there to kill him, letting Wade at least ostensibly be in control. Awesome.

Heh, well, from the writer's perspective, it was a handy way to balance up the power issues a little; from Cable's perspective, the logic went something like, what's more dangerous: 'just' seducing a guy who tried to kill you, or putting him completely off his guard by offering him some control? But even with that (and even when there are plot related reasons that will explain some of that confidence), oh yeah - Cable's balliness is somewhere off the charts.

I can't wait to see where you

[alternatedoom]

I'm kinda thinking of the scene as being more like how it would have looked if there'd been a flashback to it during C&DP, rather than how it went in the original.

Oh, for the joyful stuff of Patrick Zircher and Reilly Brown. I would pay good money to have C&DP's original meeting redrawn. But I'm extremely excited to see it spruced up and rewritten with sexytimes.

this fic actually doesn't go officially AU until scene 2 - because no-one actually saw what Cable did with Deadpool. The scene cuts straight from 'he's tied up in the library' to 'Cable's explaining what he did with him afterwards'.

I ... did not even realize. That is great. :D

[meisright]

I didn't know Liefeld art's reputation when I unzip the file back then, would it be weird if I say Liefeld's art doesn't really bother me that much? I think I'm more afraid of Steve Dillon's...

>>And that turns you on?
And that turns you on Nate?! ...it reminds me of a prompt where Deadpool goes to the future and becomes really popular in that way

>>What are you, his Dad?
Why, he isXD

>>Unless you think I also swing for public transport
What! What sort of transport I'm curious

>>Muttering obscenities at his costume
I always think the costume of them are very...inconvenient and sometimes quite silly

I love how your Nate continues to blow DP's mind and call his bluff and acting so innocent while planning everything in his head. I enjoyed this very much, thanks for writing it(I'm glad this bugged youXD) and I'm looking forward to the plot you planned:D

[rallamajoop]

would it be weird if I say Liefeld's art doesn't really bother me that much? I think I'm more afraid of Steve Dillon's...

I'm not hugely familiar with Steve Dillon's work (seems like pretty average fare from a quick google search?) but it bothers you more than Liefeld's constant grimacing and squinty eyes and wasp-shaped women and senseless anatomy and muscles on muscles on muscles? I'm not really sure what to say to that.

What! What sort of transport I'm curious

That line may have been loosely inspired by vague memory of a comedy routine (pretty sure it was by Billy Connolly) about the problems some guys face with getting erections at completely inappropriate moments. Quotes included, "And it can't tell the difference between a woman... and a bus." ;)

I always think the costume of them are very...inconvenient and sometimes quite silly

And therefore suits Deadpool almost perfectly, no? =P

I love how your Nate continues to blow DP's mind and call his bluff and acting so innocent while planning everything in his head. I enjoyed

[nope_de_plume]

It makes me so very happy that there is a 1/? after the name of this fic <3<3

[rallamajoop]

=D I only wish I could say the next chapter was coming along a little faster. ^^;