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ralaegidius

"Apology" 2/2

Apr 15, 2008 00:38

Title: Apology
Part: 2/2
Author: A. Manley Haight (ralaegidius)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: House/Wilson
Prompt: 095. House/Wilson -- punishment/apology sex for the Tritter debacle, you decide who is the one apologizing ("get_house_laid" Round 2).
Warnings: None

Disclaimer: This story is not in any way intended to infringe on copyrights held by David Shore, ( Read more... )

house, fanfic, sex

Comments 55

benjimmy April 15 2008, 10:09:03 UTC

Wow. That was fantastic.

*cannot form coherent thoughts*

alemyrddin April 15 2008, 10:30:29 UTC

wow. This was gorgeous. What a ride.
I loved how you were able to describe and interlace emotions and sex together, it felt very powerful, and very hot.
And it was also romantic, in a way.

There are many passages that I loved.
This, for example: What Wilson saw was power. House was a guarded man with both his emotions and his inner thoughts. But there was something raw, truthful, about the curve and cut of biceps that spoke of a determination to get up rather than stay flat on his back where the infarction had put him.
So true, and so well put.

The scene of Wilson trembling and House embracing him from behind, at the beginning, made me shiver with the intensity of it.
This was the only kind of apology that Wilson understood, deep in his bones. Words were not enough, and the unspoken understanding between them that usually passed itself off as an apology was certainly not. Wilson needed the touch. That was what was real to him.

And I loved how you expressed Wilson's thoughts here:to be branded by the man's touch was more than ( ... )

carnivalesque April 15 2008, 10:39:39 UTC

Just. Omg.

I stayed up. So. Late.

But omg, I really needed that. It was so well written and so spot on and so good, and thank you.

addicted2hugh April 15 2008, 11:10:07 UTC

ralaegidius April 15 2008, 12:26:22 UTC

If I made you cry, I accomplished what I intended. :) I've always thought that sex is much more deeply connected to a person's being than many people think it is (or wish it were). House knows, and that's why he doesn't let people get close to him. I'm of the opinion that he doesn't actually use hookers. He just says that to shock people.

addicted2hugh April 15 2008, 15:42:52 UTC

ralaegidius April 15 2008, 18:49:37 UTC

I think that House did have sex with Paula, but he certainly looked uncomfortable about it, like it was something he'd never actually done before. I can maybe see him paying hookers for oral, but not intercourse. Less intimate and he doesn't have to show his scar.

chowrie April 15 2008, 11:52:08 UTC

Wow. I am blown away by how much I love this. Brilliant job. And your first post at that. Hopefully not your last. Please?

Good for Wilson for taking what he wanted. Who knows when House will give him that much power again later? That level of trust was so unHouse that I would have kicked Wilson's behind if he didn't take full advantage.

Also, I adored that House realized not too long into kissing Wilson that he wants this as well. That it was not just a favor to keep Wilson happy. It was his shot to his own happiness as well.