"Apology" 2/2

[ralaegidius]

Title: Apology
Part: 2/2
Author: A. Manley Haight (ralaegidius)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: House/Wilson
Prompt: 095. House/Wilson -- punishment/apology sex for the Tritter debacle, you decide who is the one apologizing  ("get_house_laid" Round 2).
Warnings: None

Disclaimer: This story is not in any way intended to infringe on copyrights held by David Shore,

Comments

[alemyrddin]

wow. This was gorgeous. What a ride.
I loved how you were able to describe and interlace emotions and sex together, it felt very powerful, and very hot.
And it was also romantic, in a way.

There are many passages that I loved.
This, for example: What Wilson saw was power. House was a guarded man with both his emotions and his inner thoughts. But there was something raw, truthful, about the curve and cut of biceps that spoke of a determination to get up rather than stay flat on his back where the infarction had put him.
So true, and so well put.

The scene of Wilson trembling and House embracing him from behind, at the beginning, made me shiver with the intensity of it.
This was the only kind of apology that Wilson understood, deep in his bones. Words were not enough, and the unspoken understanding between them that usually passed itself off as an apology was certainly not. Wilson needed the touch. That was what was real to him.

And I loved how you expressed Wilson's thoughts here:to be branded by the man's touch was more than he had ever expected or hoped for.

This part was so very romantic and loving:
And so it meant nothing to be straight, or to be gay, House mused. It meant only to love. It was not the sex, per se, that Wilson desired from him. It was the intimacy, the proof of House's love. Sex was one of the most direct ways that House could give him joy, and that was why House was desperate now for something he had never done in his life and had never considered until tonight. Wilson had always been open to this love between them, and finally House understood.

And finally, the sex was great, weird and comfortable at the same way. But again, I loved the psychological aspects of it that you were able to describe:
He was the sort of man who was cursed to be horny but not easily aroused. He needed that mental component, the imperative of having various psychological buttons pushed.
Apparently, Wilson pushed every one of them, including a few he hadn't known he possessed.

and finally, after the sex, No desire to resume the facade because it never fooled him anyway.

so, to sum it up, wonderful job, I loved it, I hope to read more from you!