Comments | rakshi: FIC: 'Breathe...' - Sean and Elijah

rakshi

FIC: 'Breathe...' - Sean and Elijah - NC-17

Sep 15, 2007 12:06

Been working on this story off and on for awhile now. It's sort of a stream of consciousness thing and at times I just couldn't find the mental and emotional 'place' I needed to be in so that I could finish it. It was a delicate and special place and it didn't take much to jar me away from it. I think, though, that I've finally heard all that this ( Read more... )

sean and lij, story

Comments 28

julchen11 September 16 2007, 09:01:29 UTC

Sensual, sensitive, touching, emotional ... this story has it all. You're incredible, sweetheart.
I just told a friend few days before - there are stories after reading them you can't go on reading anything else...
This gem is one of those magical stories, Rakshi.
Thank you ever so much.
I'll go now and I'm sure I'll weep a little (tears of joy) because of the beauty of those words.

Lots of love and kisses,
Julchen

rakshi September 16 2007, 17:30:31 UTC

Thank you so very much, my dear lady.

I'm thrilled that it touched you.

Love..

elisamaria September 16 2007, 20:23:08 UTC

Oh, sooo beautiful - it brings me to tears!

rakshi September 16 2007, 22:15:55 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed it.

*hugs*

That Mr Astin is a master of the art of er...loving. plastictown September 16 2007, 21:07:52 UTC

Well now, I don't have any fancy words to say except..I need to find Mr Frodo right now an' let him read this story.

It's a good 'un.

*dashes off*

Re: That Mr Astin is a master of the art of er...loving. rakshi September 16 2007, 22:15:28 UTC

My beloved Sam... I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed my story. I think Mr. Astin is INDEED a master in the art of lovin' HIS Mr. Frodo... just as YOU are a master in the art of lovin' yours. I hope he enjoys the story too.

Love to all in the basket, but especially to YOU.

althea_lady September 17 2007, 05:24:27 UTC

Wow! You've done it again! Thanks for another great story.

rakshi September 21 2007, 16:29:02 UTC

Thank you SO much, sweetie. Sorry it took me so long to respond. I'm so thrilled that the story touched you.

Love..

frodosweetstuff September 21 2007, 16:21:51 UTC

What an intense story - the love-making is beautifully and dramatically written and the circumstances of their lives explain so well why it is the way it is for them.

While it breaks my heart to read a fic where they are in relationships with others despite being love with each other, I have to say I loved how Sean explained his feelings to Elijah - the need to fulfil him and also the need to possess him.

Thank you! Great fic!

rakshi September 21 2007, 16:27:48 UTC

It breaks my heart too, believe me. But.. the reality is.. that's probably how it would have to be if they had a relationship like this at ALL.. only because they're good, decent guys who wouldn't want Sean to break up his marriage while his kids were still that young. *sigh* But I totally understand your feelings!

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you from the bottom of my heart, dear lady, for your comments. Your thoughts mean a lot to me.

And, yes. You totally got it. Both fulfill and possess. And wouldn't we ALL want that?? *laughs*

*hugs*