Comments | rakshi: FIC: 'Breathe...' - Sean and Elijah

rakshi

FIC: 'Breathe...' - Sean and Elijah - NC-17

Sep 15, 2007 12:06

Been working on this story off and on for awhile now. It's sort of a stream of consciousness thing and at times I just couldn't find the mental and emotional 'place' I needed to be in so that I could finish it. It was a delicate and special place and it didn't take much to jar me away from it. I think, though, that I've finally heard all that this ( Read more... )

sean and lij, story

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summershobbit September 15 2007, 21:18:43 UTC

Wow, that was very powerful and fantastic. Hot too! Wow!
So moving, that was great.

Breathe is right!

rakshi September 15 2007, 21:47:40 UTC

Thank you, sweetie. I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

*hugs you*

slipperieslope September 15 2007, 21:18:46 UTC

I loved the rapture of this intense session of mutual resuscitation, the meld after being apart, this act of revival you displayed for us to re-breathe. What can I say, your take on them is elemental Sean/Elijah fandom to me, like oxygen.

rakshi September 15 2007, 21:51:54 UTC

What a wonderful thing to say!! Thank you! You bring tears to my eyes. yes. That's it exactly. The part of them that 'dies' when they are apart... and the resuscitation of their union which is the breath of life and renewal to the relationship that IS their heart and soul. Yes.. that's it exactly.

Love you...

shirebound September 15 2007, 22:38:45 UTC

"We're one then. One soul. One heart. How else WOULD I look to you? You look the same to me."

This is beautiful, Rakshi. As Sam would say, it's like being inside a song.

rakshi September 15 2007, 22:42:16 UTC

This is beautiful, Rakshi. As Sam would say, it's like being inside a song.

Oh my god, that is the nicest thing that anyone has ever said to me, ever! To compare my writing to something Sam said?

How do I thank you for that?

*wipes away tears and hugs you*

keye September 16 2007, 00:54:11 UTC

Oh, the love! *breathe* Wonderful!

"You're so fucking beautiful then." ~ "We're one then. One soul. One heart. How else would I look to you? You look the same to me."

Beautiful passage. ♥

rakshi September 16 2007, 17:31:35 UTC

Thank you so much, dearest lady. Your praise means more to me than I can tell you.

Love you always....

frolijah_fan_54 September 16 2007, 05:17:12 UTC

THis is wonderful - sweet and sexy and just perfect!!

rakshi September 16 2007, 17:30:54 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.

*hugs*