FIC: Time After Time (Part Four) - Sean and Elijah

[rakshi]

Comments

[primula_baggins]

I don't think I've commented before, but I have been reading this. I love this chapter, all the hope and happy beginnings. You did a terrific job describing Sean's insecurities too. There were several times I giggled at Sean and Elijah's interactions.

Looking forward to more.

*hugs*

[primula_baggins]

BTW, that manip of Sean/Elijah ten years older is terrific. I don't know how tarnishedhalo did it, but it is very "real" looking. Great job.

[rakshi]

Thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and very grateful to you for the feedback. It means a lot.

And you're right about Tarnished_halo's artwork. The pictures she maniped for 'Time After Time' are amazing. There's one left that no one has seen that'll be used with the final chapter.

Thanks again, me dear...

*hugs*

[aprilkat]

Great chapter. You really catch a lovely dynamic between them. And Sean's insecurity seems very believable.

[rakshi]

Thank you, sweetie. I'm thrilled that you liked this chapter and are enjoying the story overall. Means a lot to me that you find aspects of it believable.

Love..

[ladymoreta]

I figured i better read this before i go to the dentist this time. ;) love it.

"“Sure!” Sean said amiably. “You can hire ME!” He bounced to where Elijah stood with a plate in his hand. “Can I help you pack that plate, sir?” He took it from Elijah’s hand and sat it on top of all the others. “That’ll be one kiss,” he announced, and quickly kissed Elijah’s frowning mouth."

Too cute :)

[rakshi]

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'll be sending good and healing thoughts to you today.

*hugs*

[rakshi]

Thank you, darling. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it. I think you'll like what's coming up even more! Thank you for commenting. I'm very grateful.

Love you!

[keye]

Oh squeee, they're making a movie together! :D You write about the business so well, it's all perfectly believable. And the tight, concise plotting is terrific. So much happening, so much to look forward to. :)

Great chapter! I adore your grown up Ally, and her interactions with Sean, just lovely. ♥

[rakshi]

Thank you so MUCH, sweetie! I can't tell you how much it means to me that you're enjoying the story. And.. I'm very grateful to you for commenting. It means so much.

And, Keye?? It gets better. It's actually just heating up. *hugs you*

Love..