I don't think I've commented before, but I have been reading this. I love this chapter, all the hope and happy beginnings. You did a terrific job describing Sean's insecurities too. There were several times I giggled at Sean and Elijah's interactions.
Thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and very grateful to you for the feedback. It means a lot.
And you're right about Tarnished_halo's artwork. The pictures she maniped for 'Time After Time' are amazing. There's one left that no one has seen that'll be used with the final chapter.
Thank you, sweetie. I'm thrilled that you liked this chapter and are enjoying the story overall. Means a lot to me that you find aspects of it believable.
I figured i better read this before i go to the dentist this time. ;) love it.
"“Sure!” Sean said amiably. “You can hire ME!” He bounced to where Elijah stood with a plate in his hand. “Can I help you pack that plate, sir?” He took it from Elijah’s hand and sat it on top of all the others. “That’ll be one kiss,” he announced, and quickly kissed Elijah’s frowning mouth."
Oh squeee, they're making a movie together! :D You write about the business so well, it's all perfectly believable. And the tight, concise plotting is terrific. So much happening, so much to look forward to. :)
Great chapter! I adore your grown up Ally, and her interactions with Sean, just lovely. ♥
Thank you so MUCH, sweetie! I can't tell you how much it means to me that you're enjoying the story. And.. I'm very grateful to you for commenting. It means so much.
And, Keye?? It gets better. It's actually just heating up. *hugs you*
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Looking forward to more.
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And you're right about Tarnished_halo's artwork. The pictures she maniped for 'Time After Time' are amazing. There's one left that no one has seen that'll be used with the final chapter.
Thanks again, me dear...
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"“Sure!” Sean said amiably. “You can hire ME!” He bounced to where Elijah stood with a plate in his hand. “Can I help you pack that plate, sir?” He took it from Elijah’s hand and sat it on top of all the others. “That’ll be one kiss,” he announced, and quickly kissed Elijah’s frowning mouth."
Too cute :)
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Great chapter! I adore your grown up Ally, and her interactions with Sean, just lovely. ♥
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And, Keye?? It gets better. It's actually just heating up. *hugs you*
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