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[raizael]

title: take this sinking boat and point it home
author: chartre
rating: r
pairing: nishikato
summary: a simple touch, a momentary caress. of delicate fingertips and pressed lips on soft skin that will never stain.
notes: fictional. a three-am fic before i go away for another short trip. thanks to reuslurid for going through some parts of it for me! :) title taken

Comments

[vinyaromeniel]

awwwwwwww &hearts

I'm sorry but I don't know what else to say &hearts

[chartre]

That was just enough hun, thank you x) ♥

[fairy_illusions]

Awww beautiful~

Poor Ryo D: I don't know. It's like he's chasing after Shige so much even though he knows it'll probably be a failure in the end. At least to Shige though, he still holds a good part of his memory. Regardless of the fact that the relationship was falling apart, Shige had decided on Ryo even though his girlfriend had come over for dinner and dressed as though she values what Shige has to say/offer. YAY RYO-CHAN. And Ryo's stealthy way of hiding gifts hehe SO CUTE :D

I loved it~ &hearts

[chartre]

This is my subtle way of telling Ryo "Shige's getting his way these days *coughcoughseminarcough* and you're just losing your touch so you better do something about it." Oh, cruel world. \o/

Haha! So much for that, thank you! :) and I do like Ryo's sweet and stealthy ways too, it's just how he rolls. 8D

[tegopii]

this was really good,
I could really feel for Ryo
I was ready to dropkick shige's girlfriend out of the window and I didn't even know anything about her. o:
Thanks for this!

[foxeran]

Is it weird that what really made me fall in love with this was the way you used your tenses? Just, the parts where you went into past for a few sentences and then when it was future tense for a line, those places had me melting into little bits of love. =] And the entire progression of this was just lovely, and your writing style is so very nice to read. :D Thank you!

[chartre]

I was actually having a lot of trouble with my tenses in this particular fic because I had to keep coming back and forth with the present and the flashbacks, thus I needed some help in that. But I'm glad you appreciate the variety, thank you very much!! :)

[ceylon_miko]

ah I love it <3 it feels nostalgic and lovely. ^^