We are sorry, but your application has been denied for the following reasons: ● Grammar - A weak grasp of grammar exacerbates the character's shaky voice and leaves the samples blank of tone. This is most prominent in the Personality and Samples sections. ● Canon Support - Specifics are needed to support several points throughout the Personality section to produce a fuller and enriched presentation of understanding. ● Samples - Incorrect portrayal of the character's voice. A lack of depth and coherency has been marked throughout.
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We are sorry, but your application has been denied for the following reasons:
● Grammar - A weak grasp of grammar exacerbates the character's shaky voice and leaves the samples blank of tone. This is most prominent in the Personality and Samples sections.
● Canon Support - Specifics are needed to support several points throughout the Personality section to produce a fuller and enriched presentation of understanding.
● Samples - Incorrect portrayal of the character's voice. A lack of depth and coherency has been marked throughout.
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