Breaking Points - Chapter Five

May 30, 2009 00:01

Title: Breaking Points
Author: Ragdoll
Pairing: (eventual) Kirk/Spock, mention of Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, more's the pity.

Summary:  When the Enterprise is asked to transport Vulcan colonists to their new home, Spock Prime comes with them.  His presence changes everything - even the things Jim isn’t sure he wants to change.  A ( Read more... )

star trek, breaking points, fanfic

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wolfstarfox May 30 2009, 07:52:20 UTC
This is lovely! Thank you so much for writing it.

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ragdoll987 June 1 2009, 10:31:19 UTC
Thank you for commenting on it! =D

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stripedpetunia May 30 2009, 07:53:47 UTC
I'm so glad I looked at LJ again before bed. Still hooked! This is delicious.

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ragdoll987 June 1 2009, 10:31:37 UTC
Look again before bed tomorrow night. Maybe I can hook you again. ;)

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stripedpetunia June 1 2009, 20:37:52 UTC
Ooh, feisty. I like the cut of your jib.

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silentflux May 30 2009, 07:54:16 UTC
I'm enjoying this fic so much :) And I love the slow build-up. It makes everything that much more believable, especially with all the lovely interactions and characterizations you have. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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ragdoll987 June 1 2009, 10:32:30 UTC
I'm enjoying it too! The problem is I think I shot myself in the foot by taking nearly TOO long with it - now I have to write a sequel to make up for the stuff I couldn't put in this story. Sigh. SUCH a burden.. ;)

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silentflux June 1 2009, 13:56:57 UTC
*g*

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killbunniesdead May 30 2009, 08:01:02 UTC
I really like your story keep up the good work!

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ragdoll987 June 1 2009, 10:32:39 UTC
Thank you!

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et_tu_lj May 30 2009, 08:30:04 UTC
*squee* New chapter!!!

You are so compassionate in your portrayal of ALL the characters. I love it.

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ragdoll987 June 1 2009, 10:33:10 UTC
I love them, so there has to be something sweet about them! =D

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