Breaking Points - Chapter Five

[ragdoll987]

Title: Breaking Points
Author: Ragdoll
Pairing: (eventual) Kirk/Spock, mention of Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, more's the pity.

Summary:  When the Enterprise is asked to transport Vulcan colonists to their new home, Spock Prime comes with them.  His presence changes everything - even the things Jim isn’t sure he wants to change.  A

Comments

[curgypsy]

I get so happy when I see that you've posted a new chapter. This is one of my favorite stories right now.

[ragdoll987]

I'm so pleased to hear that! I'm really glad you think so!

[v_chan_paradise]

Love the new chapter. just a question. in the end, why this reponse of spock. Kirk didn't say he was a bastard earlier... only that he wanted to strangle him...

[ragdoll987]

Omg, good point, I made a dialogue cut in there and forgot to justify that line with new structuring! Ha! Thank you!

[rhenia_ra]

I think I love you.

♥

[ragdoll987]

<3 back!

[easterofflesh]

It's completely ridiculous how happy I am whenever I see you've posted a new chapter. In any case, can't wait for the next one! :D

[ragdoll987]

But completely flattering for me to know that, so thanks!

[tininess]

this is such an awesome piece to read! Great job xD! Eagerly waiting for the next installments

[ragdoll987]

Should be up tomorrow. :)