Fic - "Advice" - Doctor Who/Torchwood

[radiotardislive]

Title: Advice
Fandom: Doctor Who/Torchwood
Rating: K+
Pairings: Jack/Gwen, slight Rose/Doctor
Summary: A familiar face pops in to give Jack some advice whilst he laments Gwen's engagement to Rhys..
Author's Note: Written for the prompt "Ache" from philippa_, and also had to include the line "Bam, bam, strawberry jam!" Don't ask. PSE videos are bizarre

Comments

[brilliantomega]

There is a jack/gwen com you might want to look into: jack_and_gwen

[radiotardislive]

It's OK, I know about it - I belong to it, and also posted this there!

[radiotardislive]

Yes, he is rather clumsy! :D Thanks for reading!

[anonymous]

Two typos:
“What the hell are you doing her?”
I ran very memory, every image

Cute! I wish the Doctor would have a surprise visit to Torchwood, tour of the Hub and all that..

[throughshadow]

oh that was Me btw

[radiotardislive]

Thanks for that! I'll change that :)

[radiotardislive]

I'm so thick, I've only just realised it's YOU, as in Me, Me. YOU REVIEWED ONE OF MY STORIES!!! *falls on you in a massive hug*

You never use that journal, I swear.

[talkingtothesky]

Awesome! :D Aww, The Doctor giving "domestic" relationship advice! I love the idea of Jack and Ten just sitting chatting about Rose and Gwen.

And this line: “Then quite frankly, my friend, you’re stuffed.” LOL!

Gwen's gonna be one lucky girl in the morning! ;)

Thanks for a wonderful read! *memming*

One tiny mistake:
“What the hell are you doing her?” ('her' should be 'here') ROFL - given the context, this is quite a hilarious typo! :P

[radiotardislive]

Yep, Gwen's in for a treat!

(Thanks for that - lol, can you imagine if that really happened?! Jack would go nuts!!)

[cryssiemarsters]

aww I loved this so much :)
will a sequel follow? :P I'd gladly see how Jack uses this advice :)

[radiotardislive]

Thank you!

Hmm.. perhaps.. I'll see :D