Silhouettes, Chapter 3

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Title: Silhouettes 3/?
Pairing: JaeChun
Beta: Unbetaed. See mistakes? Let me know :)
Genre: fantasy/romance/angst
Length: chaptered
For:abcdefghiluvyou (Hope you like it, bb <3)
Summary: Yoochun and Jaejoong are total strangers before they meet in class. But Yoochun's a little different, can see things that others can't. And that's probably a good thing, because

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[xsuju_addictx]

MY SPOT!
MUAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH

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Ninja!

Yours, all yours :)

[xsuju_addictx]

OKAY I TOOK TOO MUCH TIME TO ACTUALLY COMMENT.
I FINALLY GOT MY MOM TO SLEEP,
THUS THE TV IS OFF. SILENCE. GOOD.
HERE GOES.

JAGSHFASKJGFASKJFASAGKF
THEY DID IT!!! WOHOOOO!!! I KNEW IT
I BLOODY KNEW IITTTTTT!!! <3333
AND SERIOUSLY, CAN YOU LIKE STOP MAKING ME
STOP BREATHING OR OUT OF BREATH?
QUOTE: They're wrapped in it, the pieces of themselves that make a whole, reassembled so they're a jigsaw together, fitted into one.
THE WORDS YOU USED...IDE-
AHHHH REALLY REALLY GOOD! YES!
*pumps fist in air*

QUOTE: “Can I have you?” He wants Yoochun, wants to touch and taste and know the other man, too see him come apart as no one else has, to be the cause of it.
THERES SOOOOOO MUCH TO QUOTE, SORRY.
CANT HELP IT. THIS LINE!!!!
SGFAKJFGAKJAFHKJFS OMG THIS LINEEE!!!1
YOU YOU YOU. OMGGGGGGGGGGGG :Q____________

NOW NOW. AGAIN?
THANK YOU FOR THE JAECHUN. *claps*
<3

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Ok, wow--thank you so much! I'm glad you're liking this and the keysmash reaction always makes an author feel good :) I'll update soon but again, thank you!

[killboredom]

I find your writing vague and dreamlike but it fits the mood and where the story is going. Which as of now I think revolve around the two characters gradual evolution and development. Cause I think finally, they've stepped out of their comfort zones and broken out of their apathetic shells into people who actually feel something.

As much as now that I'm happy that Yoochun has something to live for-it also means that whatever happens to Jae will inevitably affect Yoochun both positively and negatively since it seems now that their "life forces" are connected.

I remembered my brother's friend thru this fic, he has the same thing in a sense. So this really intrigues me :P

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I do tend to be more abstract, I definitely agree. I'm glad this caught your interest and I hope it keeps it :)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[be_ddelusionall]

god this is beautiful

and the sudden letter from Changmin ... I am so intrigued!

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Thank you <3, totally blushing now. The letter. Changmin's always been a little blunt, but that might work against him here.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment :)

[shinchul303]

Jaejoong's rescue of Yoochun is almost as moving as Yoochun's of Jaejoong. The hope in this story, couched as it is in the intense private relationship between the two, complete with tingling auras of light and literal physical bonding of hearts, is so welcome!

Yoochun's immediate reaction to Shim's letter made me smile.

"You can't have him."

Can't wait to see what you do with Changmin's character. Good guy or bad guy?

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You'll see. I think, aesthetically, Changmin sort of looks like both a good guy and a bad guy, you know? Tall, dark and handsome can go either way and he pulls both off.

I'm really glad you're liking this; I was a bit worried it was too out there or abstract to really get into.

thanks again bb <3

[shinchul303]

I agree with you on Shim Changmin. Particularly in this story even if he is a good guy (secret, not necessarily evil government agency liaison or something?) just doing his job he could still come off as a bad guy from a ChunJae perspective

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Joycean?? Joycean?!

You've made my afternoon--no, make that my week.

Thank you so much; every time I get a comment from you it's little a little present in my inbox :)

[takelo14]

jaechuuuun ^^ they're finally together :DDDDD
how does changmin know??

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Hehe. It's a secret, for now.

Soon you'll know!