Silhouettes, Chapter 3

Jan 30, 2011 21:08

Title: Silhouettes 3/?
Pairing: JaeChun
Beta: Unbetaed. See mistakes? Let me know :)
Genre: fantasy/romance/angst
Length: chaptered
For:abcdefghiluvyou (Hope you like it, bb <3)
Summary: Yoochun and Jaejoong are total strangers before they meet in class. But Yoochun's a little different, can see things that others can't. And that's probably a good thing, because ( Read more... )

silhouettes, dbsk

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crimson_miharu January 31 2011, 04:06:21 UTC
I swear these days I get so lost reading your work. No slight to you my dear your writing is beautiful I just lack the attention span to follow it sometimes w/o my mind wandering. While I was reading this I kept feeling like things were going a little to well for them. I can't help but feel that by Yoochun saving Jaejoong's life he has shortened his own. With the appearance of Changmin I see things going downhill for the couple because Changmin will not accept no for an answer...

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radioheading January 31 2011, 07:40:26 UTC
I can't admit anything yet, but in terms of structure I'm trying to make this story a little more solid now that it's moving out of the realm of Jaejoong and Yoochun's minds/souls, so hopefully it won't be so convoluted.

As for Changmin; well, he could go either way....(insert evil laughter here)

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radioheading January 31 2011, 07:41:35 UTC
<3 <3

That means so much; I was worried it was too thick, you know? Too much going on without anything really happening.

Thank you!!

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radioheading February 1 2011, 02:42:17 UTC
I might have some of those soon :)

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radioheading February 1 2011, 02:35:04 UTC
<3 Thank you! I'm really glad you're liking it :)

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abcdefghiluvyou January 31 2011, 21:30:40 UTC
oh goooosh, this is so lush and rich and sweet
ant dripping and wonderful<3 way to leave me
breathless :)

I adore the way you write Yoochun, and
how beautifully JaeChun are entwining their souls<3

changmin! I must say I was really surprised when I
read the last part, because I was so sure that this
update would be the end of this mini-series :) it
sure felt like it while reading. but I can't can't
wait for changmin in this...you know I have a thing
for him hihi :))

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radioheading February 1 2011, 02:41:32 UTC
Yeah, Changmin will definitely move this story forward a bit. I'm so glad you're liking the story because your plot suggestion was so interesting, bb.

<3

I'll try to update soon :)

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tarwen_xoxo January 31 2011, 21:45:40 UTC
omg i like this fic!
i wanna know whats going to happen next~
keep up this good writing :D

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radioheading February 1 2011, 02:35:39 UTC
Will do, thanks for calling it good :)

You'll find out what happens soon!

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