Fic: The Watchman (3/6)

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Title: The Watchman (Chapter Three)
Word Count: approx. 4,900 for this bit
A/N: Full author's notes and story info here.

Comments

[sail_aweigh]

Oh, this is just fantastic. You've got all the character voices down pat and the thought of Sherlock as a Time Lord just gives me shivers.

I do hope that Sherlock having the Doctor's psychic paper doesn't hurt the Doctor in any way. I'm also wracking my brain to remember if human's could use it also, because the thought of Sherlock with that makes my brain boggle at how he would misuse it.

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Oh, this is just fantastic. You've got all the character voices down pat and the thought of Sherlock as a Time Lord just gives me shivers.

Thank you for such a lovely comment! (And, yes, the concept gives me shivers, too!)

I do hope that Sherlock having the Doctor's psychic paper doesn't hurt the Doctor in any way. I'm also wracking my brain to remember if human's could use it also, because the thought of Sherlock with that makes my brain boggle at how he would misuse it.

Spoilers, sweetie! ; ) (But the wait shouldn't be long, at least--I'm posting the next chapter sometime today or early tomorrow.)

Again, thanks a bunch for reading and commenting!

[ariadnechan]

No... I din't want Sherlock been a timelord
This mean that when he'll fall for the roof and John not knowing the plan he will kazzo the doctor and Sherlock will have back his memories somehow and left John forever

This fic is really good and awesome, but you are breaking John and my heart now!

Sherlock trying to make a copy of the super id is the best!!

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This fic is really good and awesome, but you are breaking John and my heart now!
I'm glad you like the fic (YAY) but I'm sad about breaking your heart! And John's heart, aaaah. Does it help if I promise only to break it as much as necessary for the story? And then put it back together again? (Because John is my favorite and his heart better well stay intact!)

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic, though! (Also I <3 your icon!)

[ariadnechan]

You will save John's heart?
Thaen i could read the rest come what it may??

Sherlock would do a copy of the doctor id?
That would be amazing!!

Personal opinion:
Also i was thinking maybe the title of the genius is not one Sherlock will have from himself i think something amog the lines of The Scientist, because the genius part is obvious and it is not his job

I love your icon too

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You will save John's heart?
Thaen i could read the rest come what it may??
John will be okay in the end, I think.

Also i was thinking maybe the title of the genius is not one Sherlock will have from himself i think something amog the lines of The Scientist, because the genius part is obvious and it is not his job
I see your logic with this, but I disagree. "The Doctor" turned into a teacher, not an actual Doctor, when he used his fob watch in "Human Nature" and "The Family of Blood." The Genius isn't Sherlock, just like the Doctor wasn't John Smith.

I love your icon too
Thanks! XD

[a_phoenixdragon]

Wow...this just - I swear this can't get any better and you just topped it!! OMFG!! So wonderful!! *DANCES HAPPILY*

*SQUISHES*

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Aw, thank you so much for reading and leaving an awesome, flattering comment! (AKA I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THE BIG "OMFG WHAT" PLOT REVEAL!)

[quean_of_swords]

Just caught up on this... AMAZING! All the characters are just right--I love the Doctor's attempts to make Sherlock more like the images from the stories, etc. I also adore your John's POV. Can't wait for the next bit!

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Thank you so much! I've spent so much time trying stressing over everyone's characterization so it means a lot to hear that the characters worked for you. :D

Can't wait for the next bit!
The wait won't be long--I'm posting the next chapter tomorrow. : )