Fic: The Watchman (3/6)

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Title: The Watchman (Chapter Three)
Word Count: approx. 4,900 for this bit
A/N: Full author's notes and story info here.

Comments

[ariadnechan]

No... I din't want Sherlock been a timelord
This mean that when he'll fall for the roof and John not knowing the plan he will kazzo the doctor and Sherlock will have back his memories somehow and left John forever

This fic is really good and awesome, but you are breaking John and my heart now!

Sherlock trying to make a copy of the super id is the best!!

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This fic is really good and awesome, but you are breaking John and my heart now!
I'm glad you like the fic (YAY) but I'm sad about breaking your heart! And John's heart, aaaah. Does it help if I promise only to break it as much as necessary for the story? And then put it back together again? (Because John is my favorite and his heart better well stay intact!)

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic, though! (Also I <3 your icon!)

[ariadnechan]

You will save John's heart?
Thaen i could read the rest come what it may??

Sherlock would do a copy of the doctor id?
That would be amazing!!

Personal opinion:
Also i was thinking maybe the title of the genius is not one Sherlock will have from himself i think something amog the lines of The Scientist, because the genius part is obvious and it is not his job

I love your icon too

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You will save John's heart?
Thaen i could read the rest come what it may??
John will be okay in the end, I think.

Also i was thinking maybe the title of the genius is not one Sherlock will have from himself i think something amog the lines of The Scientist, because the genius part is obvious and it is not his job
I see your logic with this, but I disagree. "The Doctor" turned into a teacher, not an actual Doctor, when he used his fob watch in "Human Nature" and "The Family of Blood." The Genius isn't Sherlock, just like the Doctor wasn't John Smith.

I love your icon too
Thanks! XD

[ariadnechan]

Oh in any case imposing my view

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You make a really good point in your rant, about how all Time Lords are essentially geniuses. I think I'll still stick with my title for Time-Lord-Sherlock, in part just because I've already written too much of the fic to go back and change it. The other reason why I still like The Genius is that the title IS a repetition (even if Sherlock hates repetition!) of his Time Lord trait. The Genius wants to make sure everyone knows he is smarter than them--even if all Time Lords are clever, he insists upon being the most clever of them all. I imagine The Genius as very competitive as well as solitary. Unlike Sherlock, he grew up on a planet full of people who were just as quick-thinking as he was, remember. He had to fight to distinguish himself.

But as i said upthere this is only my opinion and i like to share it with you, but if you feel i'm intruding or something i won't say anymore, because i really love your fic!!No, this is awesome! I love hearing people's thoughts, and knowing my fic inspires lengthy rants makes me feel a wee bit