Fic: Take Me Away to Paradise

[rabidchild]

A/N: For elrhiarhodan , who prompted me with " Neal - on the terrace." Title is a lyric to that paean to ennui and masturbation, Green Day's "Longview."

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Comments

[elrhiarhodan]

Lovely and sad - a wonderful change of pace.

[rabidchild]

Ah, thanks. It's a funny thing, this fic - my intention was to have it be as light as it seems, but then I got all angsty on it. Ah, well.

[secretsolitaire]

Oh, Neal. :-(

[lionessvalenti]

Poor Neal. :( This is so sad, and still very hot in the descriptions of the fantasy.

[rabidchild]

Thanks! My intention at the outset wasn't for it to be sad, but it just went there, KWIM?

[virgo_79]

Ohhh.
Bittersweet and erotic, which isn't a combination that often comes to mind, but it works very well here.

[rabidchild]

Thank you - had to get the poignant in with the wank somehow ;)

[leighta]

Poor Neal