WC Fic: The Sweet Science

[rabidchild]

Title: The Sweet Science
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Sara/Elizabeth; OT4 with Peter in the background
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: None
Word Count: 1,400
Summary: Neal and Elizabeth didn't invite Sara along just to watch Neal get the crap beaten out of him, not really.

A/N: A fic to go with this pic, which is from an upcoming ep, so be

Comments

[virgo_79]

Love the sweetness of this, and the echoes of something deeper in Neal's choice of outlet.
I am, of course, particularly fond of Neal and Sara's cuddling in the backseat. :)
Very nice.

[rabidchild]

Thanks! It is an interesting dynamic to explore. Now I want to write more of this thing!

[kanarek13]

Wow... love this \o/ I think my favorite part is a) backseat cuddles ♥ b)the fact that Peter is not on board with this but El is and the girls are together taking care of Neal - something you don't see very often :P

Thank you, love it ♥

[rabidchild]

THanks! This is an interesting dynamic to play with - I am having fun.

[winterstar95]

Very nice and interesting choice of first person (done well). Thanks!

[rabidchild]

Thank you!

[embroiderama]

Oooh, I love how this hints at so much more--the backstory of Neal fighting, El's understanding of his need for pain, the clearly not very settled OT4 element. Wonderful!

[rabidchild]

Thank you so much! This has been interesting to write, and it's a bit of a new area for me. Yeee!

[elrhiarhodan]

Gorgeous and intriguing...would you consider making this a series?

[rabidchild]

Maybe. IDK - it'd have to be these little vignettes in this relationship.

[elrhiarhodan]

That would be most delightfully satisfactory!

Thank you for feeding the beast.