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rabidchild

WC Fic: The Sweet Science

Aug 31, 2012 06:32

Title: The Sweet Science
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Sara/Elizabeth; OT4 with Peter in the background
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: None
Word Count: 1,400
Summary: Neal and Elizabeth didn't invite Sara along just to watch Neal get the crap beaten out of him, not really.

A/N: A fic to go with this pic, which is from an upcoming ep, so be ( Read more... )

character: neal caffrey, pairing: neal/peter/elizabeth/sara, fics, character: sara ellis, fandom: white collar, genre: h/c, character: elizabeth burke

Comments 26

veleda_k August 31 2012, 13:06:30 UTC

Mmm, this is sweet and intimate, while still maintaining some tension. I like that Sara is slightly uncomfortable but realizes what Neal and El are offering.

It was nice to see a fic that focuses on El, Sara, and Neal. Peter is still there in spirit, of course, but he's not present. This is something for the three of them, and it creates an interesting dynamic.

rabidchild September 2 2012, 20:06:59 UTC

Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it - fun to explore this different "pairing" a bit.

monkeyonthelam August 31 2012, 14:06:50 UTC

I like that you told this from Sara's point of view, it added great emotion to the story. I am so happy to hear that other people are craving ot4 as well. Even if you don't continue this fic, any more ot4 fics would be great. Thanks for writing.

rabidchild September 2 2012, 20:07:46 UTC

Just wrote a sequel - hope you enjoy: http://rabidchild67.livejournal.com/138122.html

lauracollared August 31 2012, 16:27:53 UTC

I really enjoyed this. For something discussing violence and hurt, it is very calm and soothing (which I know is intentional... but as a reader is still surprising).

I love at-peace, quiet, sweet, child-like Neal. He's a favorite Neal. <3

I also would be very happy to read more, if you chose to do so. :)

rabidchild September 2 2012, 20:10:02 UTC

Aaaannnnddd... a sequel: http://rabidchild67.livejournal.com/138122.html

micheleeeex August 31 2012, 21:36:18 UTC

I love this!

rabidchild September 2 2012, 20:10:25 UTC

thanks!

hurinhouse August 31 2012, 21:59:51 UTC

it's nice that we have that amazing pic to go with this, but even though i adore it, it's not needed - the fic stands on its own - intriguing dynamics. is this part of a series you've done?

hurinhouse August 31 2012, 22:03:04 UTC

i meant to say that it's just like peter to not want to see this. i can imagine the arguments.

rabidchild September 2 2012, 20:11:16 UTC

Not part of a series, but maybe the first in a new one (sigh - I can't resist). There's a sequel now, here: http://rabidchild67.livejournal.com/138122.html