Drabble: Careless Whispers (ADAD #36)

[qwertyfaced]

Title: Careless Whispers
Author: QWERTYfaced
Fandom: White Collar
Wordcount: 200
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal Caffrey, Peter Burke, Diana Berrigan
Genre: Drabble, gen, humor
Notes: For the extended A Drabble A Day personal challenge, and whitecollar100's Challenge 133 - Games.
Summary: Neal tries to get a message across to Peter.
Disclaimer: This is a work of

Comments

[reve_silencieux]

*snicker*

Oh I did NOT see that coming, not with the first line. Hehe!! Poor Peter, but it would have been worse otherwise!

[qwertyfaced]

I have a slightly unfortunate weakness for stories with a punchline. :D Still, at least drabbles are well suited to that.

And yes, it'd be so much worse to have his fly actually open in the group photo!

[calis_1st]

"Your fly is open" - "horeseflies hoping" - yup, of course.

[qwertyfaced]

It's amazing how garbled a message can get, and how quickly, too. :D

[scarym1]

Oh that is clever. It took me a moment to get it. : ) : )

[qwertyfaced]

Hehe, thank you. :D

[joy2190]

Hahahaha

[qwertyfaced]

:D Somehow, I giggle a little to myself every time I read this comment.

[eldorah]

Hahahahaha! Hilarious!!! Absolutely loved the ending! Wonderful job!

[qwertyfaced]

Thank you! :) Poor Peter, I always seem to stick him as the straight man. If someone's going to trip on the stairs, or get embarrassed, or drink something nasty...I always pick on him.