Primeval ficlet, Heartfelt, Ethan, Danny, 15

Feb 15, 2011 02:40

Title: Heartfelt
Author: quoththewriter 
Rating: 15
Characters/Pairings: Ethan, Danny
Warnings: *slight spoilers for 4.07*, gore 
Word Count: 466
Disclaimer: not mine, never mine.
A/N: Originally posted as a comment!fic in Sunday Chat because fredbassett  bought up that Ethan's idea of a valentine would be an actual heart.

And then, he waited. )

challenge:v-day fic, fandom:primeval, character:danny quinn, type:comment!fic, character:ethan dobrowski

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lukadreaming February 15 2011, 07:44:40 UTC
Good one! Scary image. And Ethan is such a romantic *g*.

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quoththewriter February 15 2011, 07:49:04 UTC
Ain't he a doll? (; Thanks!

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estel_willow February 15 2011, 10:27:12 UTC
Oh, Ethan. You're a bastard, but I adore you.

The imagery in this is really great, and powerful. I really like the idea that Ethan's travelled so much and so far that it doesn't really affect him any more, but that his plans to kill Danny got ruined and that pisses him off enough to make him do something stupid and mean. Love it.

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quoththewriter February 16 2011, 00:22:03 UTC
Isn't he lovely? *g*

Thank you! I like to think that his travels have really screwed him up pretty bad. We see evidence of that in the show, obviously, and being that he's been travelling through the anomalies since he was fourteen, he's got to have desensitised fairly a bit, I suspect! And of course there's that lovely moment where he fails to kill Danny, which I just love because it says so much about his character. Obviously he's none too pleased with Danny and he's mentioned that he's thought about killing him innumerable times, but then when given the opportunity, he can't go through with it. I really like that contrast. And it would certainly have to piss him off.

Thanks so much!

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fredbassett February 15 2011, 11:06:22 UTC
LOL, he's definitely a romantic bastard!

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quoththewriter February 16 2011, 00:23:46 UTC
Certainly! Nothing like a big old cat heart to the face to tell someone you care.

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nietie February 15 2011, 13:50:43 UTC
Eek! That's intense and scary and gives a new meaning to heartfelt.

In a way I feel sorry for Ethan. Those past years must have been very bad for him.

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quoththewriter February 16 2011, 00:26:20 UTC
That's what I was going for! :D Ethan does intense and scary very well.

I definitely feel sorry for him. He's really, really screwed up, but there's a definite reason for it and it's very believable. He's had a hard life. (I've actually got a fic in the works that touches on various points in his life, and one of them is the first time he needs to kill another living thing and he gets really, really torn up about it! *pets* He was human once!)

PS, your icon is lovely. *pervs*

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rodlox February 16 2011, 03:01:02 UTC
hopefully Ethan was like some people & just didn't worry about sex while he was going through adolescence.

otherwise...oh dear.

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jooles34 February 15 2011, 14:06:46 UTC
Evil, nasty, messy, utterly fab!

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quoththewriter February 16 2011, 00:26:31 UTC
Thank you! :D

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