Heroes, "Home Away From Home: A Hiro's Journey Never Ends" Hiro | rated G

Dec 27, 2011 21:35

Fandom: Heroes
Title: Home Away From Home: A Hiro's Journey Never Ends
Author: Paynesgrey
Characters/Pairings: Hiro Nakamura, Ando/Kimiko, mention of Tracy
Word Count: 300
Rating: G (PG-13 for series)
Genre: Drama/Adventure
Warnings/Spoilers: Post-Series canon. No warnings.
Notes: Written for the "sticky" prompt for fanfic_bakeoff. This is the second part of my ( Read more... )

heroes, minor characters, tracy, ando, hiro, home away from home, fanfic bakeoff

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angary December 28 2011, 13:34:33 UTC
I love this! Very in character for Hiro; I could so see him contemplating going back and changing things, as well as feeling kind of aimless and like his life wasn't going anywhere - especially compared to Ando - but realizing that he shouldn't play with fire anymore. This shows a lot of growth for him, and the reveal about Strauss and Sanders is awesome! It has a great sense of optimism, and a path that would be very good for Hiro.

You weaved in so many great tidbits of Hiro's life and experiences throughout the show, saying so much in so little, and nicely tied everything to the prompt. All in all, this is excellent! :D

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quirkysmuse December 28 2011, 14:11:31 UTC
Wow thanks so much for the comment! Glad you liked this and that it was in-character for you.
Totally made my morning. :)

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edgyauthor December 29 2011, 06:04:00 UTC
Aw, this was such a quick but great fic! It's been a very long time since I've seen Heroes (I got fed up during season 3), but Hiro has always been one of my favorites from it, and this very much felt like his character. I love the line about Ando being a hero to his niece--so sweet, and such a very "Hiro" way to phrase things!

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quirkysmuse December 29 2011, 12:28:01 UTC
Aww, thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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