Young Avengers, "Notice You" Tommy/Kate ficlet

[quirkysmuse]

Fandom: Young Avengers (Marvel comics)
Title: Notice You
Author: Paynesgrey
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Tommy[Speed], unrequited Tommy/Kate[Hawkeye], Kate/Eli[Patriot] implied
Word Count: 294
Disclaimer: I do not own the Young Avengers, Marvel etc. does.
Spoilers: reference to Young Avengers Presents
Notes: Written for the "clue" prompt at fanfic_bakeoff

Comments

[iridania]

Ok, first of all: ♥

I usually don't like "1st pov" fics but I find the 1st person quite fitting for this one. And I *like* the characterisation, especially these two lines:
[I promise you, Kate. I’ll try harder, much harder to win you.]
And: [I can’t promise you I’ll slow down, but I’ll wait, and I’ll be ready].
They're spot on.

I think that right now Tommy is not mature enough for a relationship with Kate to work out BUT he really relly likes her, and he's willing to try and better himself to get her attention. Which is what I like the most about their relationship. ♥

Thank you for writing and sharing this! - the world needs more Kate/Tommy :D

[quirkysmuse]

Oh wow, your comment made my day. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you liked it!

[favouriteyear]

I really like this. I just started reading YA, and I can definitely see this happening!

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you so much!

I'm happy you're reading Young Avengers. I hope you're enjoying it. Wait until you get to Children's Crusade. EPIC.

[favouriteyear]

YAY. I love Kate so much OMG. And Teddy and Billy are so adorable. ♥