Theme and Variations: Largo (Bleach, 3/4)

[aishuu]

Comments

[incandescens]

I love the way you show the shift of emotions and tension here, from hopelessness to positive resolve, and I think you write a very plausible Kira. That was great. Thank you!

[aishuu]

Thank you! Kira is hard to get a handle on, because despite his near despondency after he realizes he's been the cat's paw, he's actually very competent.

[uminohikari]

♥!! I really adored the detail in this fic *.* I particularly liked your Kusajishi, especially what Kira thinks as they interact

to the the vice captains
extra the!

[aishuu]

Sanks muchly, chere. Hope you like the last in the series. ^_^

[mysocalledhell]

wow ... absolutely wonderful... absolutely love the side of Kira that you showed in the last paragraph there ... very powerful thoughts.

[aishuu]

I wrote this entire piece just to get to that paragraph, so I'm really glad to hear that!