Pedestrian Crossings - 02: And then he comes along. [DBSK; JaeMin; PG]

[yumeyana]

title: Pedestrian Crossings - 02: And then he comes along.
author: yumeyana
fandom: dbsk
pairing: jaejoong x changmin
rating/genre: PG / drama, angst, sap, romance, humor
chapter: 2 of ?
summary: Billions of people, millions in South Korea. Two people bump into each other and without knowing, their story begins to unfold.

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Comments

[hayasaki]

Ohh you made my night! Even if the rest of it has to be dominated by revision, this was the perfect break *o* Ah really good! I love the competition between Changmin and Chun! Poor Junsu though at the end, and poor Min too! He needs his Jaeee! I don't know this is a really incoherent pointless comment for such a lovely piece.. but well, I did really enjoy, and I love the way you write!

[yumeyana]

I love your icon. ♥

I'm glad that I made your night better. Thank you for reading this; you made my night! ^^

[boeboebi]

2ND!!

whoa!!! i'll brb!!

...et j'aime le francais sur.. site.. de toi!!! TT_______TT.. je regrette, je n'est pas bonne à parle francais. (even that frase has some grammar mistakes lolz) but i luv teh french interface really it's neat. i can still understand and navigate haha!!

[boeboebi]

comment parles-tu francais quand tu es filipino?? ^^??? o_O??

[boeboebi]

yoominho fighting for jaejae. and do i see hosu?? @_@!!!

maybe you can make joongie pick somebody instead of them tugging him lolz. ur joongie is like one of those girlish outgoing personality character who just goes with the flow lolz but i mean that as a good thing :D

i'm hoping for eventual yoosuho and jaemin ^^ harrr update soon, i wanna see who fell to the ground first in this tug-of-war lol.

[yumeyana]

I know so little French I understood none of what you said. Hehe. I just love the language and the way it sounds and it's the main reason why I used it. (^^;;)

Well, the tug-of-war might continue longer, what with YunHo finally showing his cards. But Jae will pick only one, don't worry. ^^

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you like it! ♥

[ciel_dao]

Ahaha, le francais. Pourquoi est-ce que tu utillise de francais? Ton anglais est vraiment tres bon, alors, je ne pense pas que tu habite en France.

Anyway, back to my better language. YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY. It is absolutely TERRIFIC! SQUEE! I love your style and hope you update soon.

[boeboebi]

JE SUIS VIETNAMESE XDDDDDDDDD!!!! ET J'HABITE À ...OHIO... like seriously =_=

je utillise francais parce-que il y a francais sur ce... site =_=.. and i thought i would be fun somehow. letting my french be in some good use lolz. et oui, je parle anglais mailleure (plus bon?) que francais. :D:D:D.. since french is my 3rd language and korean is my fourth (which is even more horrible)

[yumeyana]

I'm glad I've made your day. And you have made mine by reading this. Thank you! ♥

[x_voracity]

OMG TRES MAL~ The Ho factor, it always makes me a little sad. And oh Chun and Min, such delicate little flowers. Which reminds me - I really liked the opening line.

Perhaps, you think as JaeJoong pouts and demands that you defend him from the evil YooChun, exclusivity can mean that he belongs to both of you.
Very cute, very.

P.S. I saw that you had a YYH fic from the link you posted up. I swear I've read it before - have you posted it on aff.net before? ^^ I just had to ask because dejavu feelings drive me crazy

[yumeyana]

Nope, I haven't posted it there. Not that I remember anyway. (^^;;)

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you~!

[thievingbird]

Please do continue with this, I'm really enjoying it ♥
I like the style you write in also, it's not something I'm used to reading, the whole first person aspect of it is quite different.
You bring out the angst nicely as well as the subtle humor (while you try to shift his attention to more important things-that, of course, being food HAHA), the thoughts that go through Min's head are believable and make me feel more for the boy and what he's experiencing. Of coarse I am Min biased, and the thought of anyone taking Jae from Min is frustrating me *facepalm*
But please ...more ♥

[yumeyana]

Well, for me, Min has this humorous side that doesn't really come out often (not as often as JunSu's) and I like putting it in in the most unexpected of moments. ^^ I'm glad that you're enjoying this. Thank you for reading and I agree that Min belongs to Jae alone! ♥