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quiet_elle

FanFic : Heroes : Adam Monroe : The Forever Man's Poetry

Apr 25, 2008 13:17

Title : The Forever Man’s Poetry.
Characters : Adam Monroe.
Rating : Gen, though deals with darker themes
213 words
Written for heroes_contest challenge, ‘Forever’.
Summary; He was given forever, but in this deal what did forever take from him.

( Sometimes when he’s feeling poetic he can look across which ever landscape he happens to be in and epitomize it into what forever is. )

! fanfic challange, fanfic: heroes, tv shows: heroes

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quiet_elle April 26 2008, 00:31:05 UTC

ahh thanks darling. It was strange writing Hereoes again after such a while :) But this one just came, in a slightly odd stlye :D

vaeltaa April 25 2008, 12:53:35 UTC

This is wonderful! It reads like a poem, so bittersweet and poignant. Thanks for sharing!

quiet_elle April 26 2008, 00:32:11 UTC

well thank you very much, i too thought it was a bit like a poem sometimes writing brings the strangest things out of you :)

failoh April 26 2008, 13:00:44 UTC

Oooohhhh, really good.

I love your style in this one, and I like the thought of the changes in Adam throughout "forever", how you comment on his effect on people. Really nice!

quiet_elle April 27 2008, 15:57:28 UTC

thank you very much :)

I have to say with this fic it just sort of popped in out of nowhere :D, style and all.

pcdarkrose April 28 2008, 21:27:18 UTC

Very insightful and eloquently written. This is precious.

quiet_elle April 29 2008, 10:03:37 UTC

thanks you very much :)