Fic! Again! Some more!

Jan 25, 2011 16:42

Hello! You thought I'd forgotten, didn't you? But no, I'm just having a super-busy day and this is the first chance I've had to hop online. You don't want to hear about my day. It involved boring things  like going to the bank, and the post office, and the bank again, and getting tacos, and watching the tennis. Okay. I only watched a little bit of ( Read more... )

spit out your bubblegum, ray/nate, fic, porn, brad/walt

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janes_thomas January 25 2011, 06:33:20 UTC
oh baby baby baby... ray - you are so fucked!

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puckling January 25 2011, 07:00:35 UTC
“Quiet, baby,” he whispered, sounding amused. “They’ll hear you.”

NATE. NATE. NATE. I JUST. I CAN'T.

“You think, if you asked nicely,” Nate went on, lips brushing against the shell of Ray’s ear and sending shivers down his body, “If you asked really nicely, Brad would let you lick the taste of Walt’s come out of his mouth?”

YOU ARE TRYING TO KILL ME, AREN'T YOU? I CAN SEE WHAT YOU ARE DOING THERE BECKS, TRYING TO KILL ME WITH THE HOT PORN. JESUS FUCKING CHRIST.

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laura_iskra January 25 2011, 09:18:41 UTC
uisdiucgwygr uygrciUWHEoxhwotH

OH RAY!
OH NATE!

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dana_knockouts January 25 2011, 12:41:55 UTC
Wow, yeah. Good morning!

I kinda love that you're drawing this out.

Also, I love Nate talking dirty. Outstanding.

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salvadore_hart January 25 2011, 17:06:29 UTC
Nate was the world’s most restless sleeper. He talked into his pillow, tossed and turned, got up sixty three times a night to get a drink of water or check his emails or reread the paper - and then woke up fresh as a daisy every morning while Ray rubbed at his dark circles and did the zombie shuffle to the coffee pot.
I love this line and the awww and domesticity of it. How you write the relationship, and how together it is, is just awesome.

As for the rest, not be redundant but, NATE! YOU SEXY BASTARD!

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