Part 1: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessmeeks00March 31 2010, 19:43:29 UTC
OK. This prompt/fic OWNED me. This is...like half of it, but it's too long, and it's killing me, so I'm putting it away for a while. Sorry it didn't turn out to be Brad/Nate!! Also, I'm giving up on trying to anon, Beck, you know I keep failing at that shit
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Part 2: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessmeeks00March 31 2010, 19:45:17 UTC
When they were shipped home, Brad rode the long way home from LAX on his Yamaha R1, which waited for him wrapped in its black tarp cover in the airport lot. His parents know that when he gets back from a tour that he needs peace and he needs time before he can see them. He needs to unwind and recover and get used to things again, and his bike does that when they can’t. Usually he sees them the next day
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Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessmeeks00March 31 2010, 19:45:56 UTC
“You want it bad, don’t you,” Ray breathed against his neck as Brad doubled up his fingers and pressed into him. They didn’t have lube, just spit and a prayer, and fuck if that didn’t get Brad off so bad. “Fuck. Like that, yeah.”
Brad scissored his fingers inside him then, stretching and prepping, their sweaty skin sticking and scraping, his balls heavy and his cock hard as fuck against Ray’s.
“Never thought you’d be the soft type, Sergeant,” Ray went on, his voice cracking on the name as Brad added another finger. “Being all magnanimous and shit when I know you just want to pound me into this couch. Just fuckin’ fuck me raw already. You’re achin’ for it, your fuckin’ gorgeous cock - I can feel it, like you’re gonna blow all over me before you even
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Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lesssharksdontsleepMarch 31 2010, 21:48:05 UTC
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE. Awesome. I love Brad when he's being all magnanimous and shit. Also, Ray would love the fuck out of "Goodnight, Moon," because seriously, who doesn't? AWESOME AGAIN.
Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessqueeniegaloreMarch 31 2010, 22:08:26 UTC
This is me proposing internet marriage! I wll be a good internet wife, I'll bake you internet cookies, I'll, like, make you internet cocktails when you get home from work and ask you how your day has been. I'll do ANYTHING.
JUST NEVER STOP WRITING AMAZING FIC.
Mika, I love this so much. Ugh, I love stories where people love Ray, and I love stories where he talks and no one wants him to shut up. THAT IS MY KINK - RAY TALKING (surprise!). AND I love fics where Brad makes big grand gestures without saying a word.
Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessmeeks00March 31 2010, 22:44:58 UTC
LOL!!! Honey, if this were Facebook, I'd have already changed my relationship status to "married," just for you.
And I'm so glad you liked this! I've no clue what it is, to be honest. And I SUPER SHARE YOUR KINK TO THE MAX. It's lovely reading fics where people LOVELOVE Ray because WE love Ray, yeah?
Also, I shall keep on keepin' on as long as I can. This is...half of what I mean for the fic to turn into. But I have connecting bit issues at present, so I thought I'd drop this off and get the weight of impending kink meme closure off my chest.
Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessl_s_d_meApril 1 2010, 01:04:16 UTC
You know.... this is NOT helping the current predicament we are in involving an ever growing/intensifying obsession with Ray/PJ *gives you stern looks*
I LOOOOVED THIS THOUGH! DAMN YOU FOR FEEDING MY BURGEONING ACCEPTANCE FOR BRAD/RAY! *cries*
and give one final shout out: “Goodnight, moon!”
LMAO! I want to high five your brain.
He stared up at the man until Ray came closer, closer until he was seated on Brad’s pelvis, straddling his waist with his knees pressing tight against Brad’s hips.
*dies before i get a chance to do said high fiving*
Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessmeeks00April 1 2010, 02:07:45 UTC
LOL!!! Well I blame you for intensifying my Pacific obsession!!! It's the crossover of the cigarettes! And I have to admit though that I'm definitely trying to bring you over to the dark side, because it's fun for me to squee with somebody haha! I'm selfish :(
I want to high five your brain. HAHAHAHA Well, it's a puddle of happy MUSH after your tidbit from earlier. So, good luck with that.
And I'm so SO relieved and happy you liked it! I was scared of this one. ♥
Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessthelackoflightApril 1 2010, 02:22:30 UTC
GUUUUUUUH. Damn, that was fucking amazing.
I love your characterization in this, especially Ray. I can imagine so many of these parts so vividly in my head because it's just so Ray Fucking Person to say goodnight to the moon (the image is so cute too), talk with food falling out of his mouth, and ask Brad straight out what he wants. I'm going to add all these images to my own Ray canon and fall in love with him some more.
Then there's Brad. His quiet intensity is so perfectly shown here.
“Being all magnanimous and shit when I know you just want to pound me into this couch. Fucking hot.
Re: Part 3: Brad/Ray - If I loved you lessmeeks00April 1 2010, 12:29:32 UTC
:D What a wonderful comment to wake up to! I'm so happy that you liked Ray and thought he was in character. He has such a big personality that it's really intimidating to approach.
I'm going to add all these images to my own Ray canon and fall in love with him some more. Really, you're too nice! This makes me full of smiles and Ray!love.
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Brad scissored his fingers inside him then, stretching and prepping, their sweaty skin sticking and scraping, his balls heavy and his cock hard as fuck against Ray’s.
“Never thought you’d be the soft type, Sergeant,” Ray went on, his voice cracking on the name as Brad added another finger. “Being all magnanimous and shit when I know you just want to pound me into this couch. Just fuckin’ fuck me raw already. You’re achin’ for it, your fuckin’ gorgeous cock - I can feel it, like you’re gonna blow all over me before you even ( ... )
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I love Brad when he's being all magnanimous and shit. Also, Ray would love the fuck out of "Goodnight, Moon," because seriously, who doesn't?
AWESOME AGAIN.
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JUST NEVER STOP WRITING AMAZING FIC.
Mika, I love this so much. Ugh, I love stories where people love Ray, and I love stories where he talks and no one wants him to shut up. THAT IS MY KINK - RAY TALKING (surprise!). AND I love fics where Brad makes big grand gestures without saying a word.
SIIIIIIIIGH. What a great thing to wake up to!
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And I'm so glad you liked this! I've no clue what it is, to be honest. And I SUPER SHARE YOUR KINK TO THE MAX. It's lovely reading fics where people LOVELOVE Ray because WE love Ray, yeah?
Also, I shall keep on keepin' on as long as I can. This is...half of what I mean for the fic to turn into. But I have connecting bit issues at present, so I thought I'd drop this off and get the weight of impending kink meme closure off my chest.
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I LOOOOVED THIS THOUGH! DAMN YOU FOR FEEDING MY BURGEONING ACCEPTANCE FOR BRAD/RAY! *cries*
and give one final shout out: “Goodnight, moon!”
LMAO! I want to high five your brain.
He stared up at the man until Ray came closer, closer until he was seated on Brad’s pelvis, straddling his waist with his knees pressing tight against Brad’s hips.
*dies before i get a chance to do said high fiving*
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I want to high five your brain.
HAHAHAHA Well, it's a puddle of happy MUSH after your tidbit from earlier. So, good luck with that.
And I'm so SO relieved and happy you liked it! I was scared of this one. ♥
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I think we should just accept that we both try and flame the fire of obsession with each other. a rip roaring awesomesauce fire.
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I love your characterization in this, especially Ray. I can imagine so many of these parts so vividly in my head because it's just so Ray Fucking Person to say goodnight to the moon (the image is so cute too), talk with food falling out of his mouth, and ask Brad straight out what he wants. I'm going to add all these images to my own Ray canon and fall in love with him some more.
Then there's Brad. His quiet intensity is so perfectly shown here.
“Being all magnanimous and shit when I know you just want to pound me into this couch. Fucking hot.
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I'm going to add all these images to my own Ray canon and fall in love with him some more.
Really, you're too nice! This makes me full of smiles and Ray!love.
Thanks again!
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ENDLESS LOVE.
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