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anonymous March 30 2010, 11:12:24 UTC
Ray/Walt, Walt has the gift to project images and memories into people's minds. Whenever Walt imagines about fucking Ray, he is accidently sending those images to Ray and it drives Ray crazy.

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anonymous March 30 2010, 12:03:47 UTC
Seconded.

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Interference, part 1/4 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 15:39:49 UTC
Not sure if this directly fulfills the prompt (and not sure why it starts in church), but here goes. Fic can also be found here: http://sharksdontsleep.livejournal.com/2425.html... )

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Re: Interference, part 2/4 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 15:40:12 UTC
Walt is balancing on the ball of his left foot, hands raised above him. Rudy navigates around them, calm as a raft on water, adjusting, urging Marines to allow the energies to flow through their palms, to stop snickering. After Rudy does a pose that Walt assumed could only be achieved through having three vertebrae and a rib removed, they stop snickering ( ... )

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Re: Interference, part 3/4 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 15:40:33 UTC
It’s two weeks after OIF and his dirt-tan has finally washed off. Walt sleeps in a bed, plays XBOX all day, jerks off thinking about the girls from Hustler, the girls from Playboy, the girls from the supermarket who lean over to stock the produce section. Ray’s been couch-surfing for a minute now, spending his days draped over Walt’s furniture, fingers mad on the controller of whatever game their playing ( ... )

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Re: Interference, part 4/5 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 15:41:16 UTC
There’s an old pair of stockings that Walt’s last girlfriend had left, the kind with the industrial-strength waistband that come from a plastic egg at the drugstore. Ray emerges from the other room carrying them, sits with his back against the base of the sofa and just hands them to Walt ( ... )

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 15:41:38 UTC
But instead Ray palms the back of Walt’s head, kisses the corner of his mouth, the hollow of his neck. His mouth can’t seem to stay still and he’s talking, chest rumbling under one of Walt’s hands. He reaches down, grasps Walt’s cock in his hand, begins to stroke. Ray’s hand is wet from the spit he’d wiped off his face. It’s wet when he tugs on Walt’s balls, wet when he reaches behind ( ... )

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 emerald_skies March 31 2010, 15:53:58 UTC
Gah, fantastic (the fic and the prompt). Favorite lines:

Ray’s in the shower a few days later, singing “Crazy in Love” so loud and off-tune, Walt’s cat yowls back.

I laughed so hard irl because I could totally see it in my head.

“Jesus fuck, Walt. Do you ever shut up?” Ray says

Irony (or possibly hypocrisy) at its finest. Oh, Ray.

I'd quote the sexy parts but there are too many and I don't want to go on for days here so I'll just send general love vibes your way <3

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 18:25:11 UTC
Thank you! Ray's caterwauling is an inspiration to us all. Glad to have amused.

Thanks for the good vibes! This should really be the never-ending meme - everyone's having so much fun.

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 valmontheights March 31 2010, 16:49:13 UTC
Why is everything about this meme so goddamn awesome? It's like sensory overload, I swear. This manages to be filthy and kinky and yet imaginative and touching at the same time. So, so good.

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 sharksdontsleep March 31 2010, 18:29:07 UTC
Thank you! This meme is so terrific. It is like rainbows, fireworks, and unicorn sperm. Dirty, with metaphors, is what I go for!
Thanks again!

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 queeniegalore March 31 2010, 22:15:00 UTC
I love this, like I've loved all your Ray/Walt stuff (sorry I've been slack commenting). I love that you write them with an edge of darkness, a touch of grit that makes it real and hurty and so, so GOOD. And I love that you don't use any gloss - they are what they are. And what they are, lady, is fucking HOT.

Thanks for playing :D

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 sharksdontsleep April 1 2010, 01:00:28 UTC
Wow, THANK YOU! That means a lot. I have been real crap about leaving feedback, but I love "For Once I Could Go Off" and "Use Your Hands." Motor oil, who doesn't love motor oil? I didn't even know I liked that until you mentioned it. Awesome awesome stuff.

They are what they are - unreconstructed rednecks making out in my mind.

And this meme is soooooooo awesome. We could do this once a month and never run out of prompts/stories.

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 l_s_d_me March 31 2010, 23:39:11 UTC
I just love your Walt!! <3

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 sharksdontsleep April 1 2010, 01:01:14 UTC
So does Ray! Thanks!!!

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Re: Interference, part 5/5 l_s_d_me April 1 2010, 01:06:39 UTC
I actually said, "giggle" when I read "so does ray" LOL.

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