Trombley being gentle with somebody, his wife or anyone else. Hell, if you skipped the porn and had him nursing a cat, I would be okay with that. Just show the loving side of our psycho.
Hand Pornography 1/2discordantcatMarch 30 2010, 22:55:42 UTC
“What the hell are you lookin' at?” Ray snaps. He continues nursing his fingers, sore from taking the wheel into battle for hours on end. And combat jacks. Although Ray had previously shot off his mouth to his team about not enjoying jerking off as much now, he'll never complain about driving. Recon Marines don't complain about driving
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Re: Hand Pornography 2/2discordantcatMarch 30 2010, 22:57:59 UTC
“Why is everyone so quiet today?” Evan asks, scanning the horizon beyond the window. A dark cloud is approaching and the air has turned cold. The atmosphere inside the Humvee, though, was colder and more awkward than outside, at least to Evan.
Brad sneers at Ray, who desperately tried to ignore it and keep his eyes on the road. The team leader in the cramped vehicle looks back at Trombley. “You saw me approaching, didn't you, Trombley?”
“He fuckin' didn't!” Ray says.
“I did,” Trombley answers.
“Shit.”
There is no way Brad is going to let Ray live this down easily. Not if he can tease him for the whole day. “So much for 'Don't Tell', I didn't even need to ask,” Brad says.
“Sgt Colbert, please shut up,” Ray sighs.
Brad gives Trombley a thumbs up and considers his day made.
Re: Hand Pornography 2/2discordantcatApril 2 2010, 01:37:07 UTC
I couldn't resist reading this to see how you wrote Trombley and tenderness, with Ray, of all people, and while this isn't ever going to be my usual cup of tea, I think you did a great job!
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Brad sneers at Ray, who desperately tried to ignore it and keep his eyes on the road. The team leader in the cramped vehicle looks back at Trombley. “You saw me approaching, didn't you, Trombley?”
“He fuckin' didn't!” Ray says.
“I did,” Trombley answers.
“Shit.”
There is no way Brad is going to let Ray live this down easily. Not if he can tease him for the whole day. “So much for 'Don't Tell', I didn't even need to ask,” Brad says.
“Sgt Colbert, please shut up,” Ray sighs.
Brad gives Trombley a thumbs up and considers his day made.
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I had to stop reading partway through to hyperventilate, it was that amazing. WOULD YOU LIKE MY SOUL IN PAYMENT, OR JUST MY BODY?
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