[infinite] the wavefunction collapse

[quarticpolynomi]

Title: the wavefunction collapse
Rating: pg-13
Word count: 3270
Summary: There are many ways that Hoya and Dongwoo could have had their happy ending.

Comments

[leadernim]

This was beautiful ;AAAAA; I was reminded so much of the Japanese drama "Proposal Daisakusen," in which a character travels again and again back in time to reclaim his love but he can't bring himself to confess at any interval of their friendship and he might lose her forever and and
This is marvelous. All the different scenarios, they felt so real, god Hoya...I wanted to hit him for not saying anything but then he did and this was amazing and you are amazing and I love YaDong and ;AAAAA; Thank you for writing this and sharing with us, I love it!

[quarticpolynomi]

ah, i had never thought of equating this story with that drama; i watched it quite a long while ago and had not remembered it. in a sense, though, it's a similar theme, as there were many things that could have happened but didn't. many worlds theory, the wavefuntion collapse, etc. it's a fascinating game to play, imagining the worlds that could have been and still might be.

thank you very much. i am glad that you enjoyed the story. i did very much enjoy writing hoya, for a change.

[khjbro]

/sobbing This is so so so so so so SO beautiful, I don't know what to say. But there are tears. Oh, there are tears. This is lovely; every ending is very believable and how I wish K was real.
It’s easy, it’s so easy to say it, to feel Dongwoo tense and watch his arms fall and his face contort and if Hoya wasn’t such a masochist, he’d stop looking, he'd run away and never look back. Favourite part.
Fantastic execution as per usual. Well done ;u;

[quarticpolynomi]

thank you very much. i am especially pleased that you found every ending believable.

[sven2ity]

I do believe I have a very intense love-hate relationship with this fic.

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I really love the way you write. So far, everything I've read by you has this really scientific format, to the point where the writing almost seems clinical-- but, the thing is, it's not. You portray emotions with an intensity that contrasts beautifully, and the end result is that instead of your writing coming off as objective, it just end up being very definite. That is, it has a very weighted feeling to it; a bitter sting of reality that cuts deep. Ffffff, I hope I'm making sense.

Oh wait! Perfect example:

Eventually, they all die. This is the end of the story.

It's such a biting statement, presented so straightforwardly, but it's trueWhich brings me to the hate part of this fic. I hate disbandment fics. I hate fics that make me think about reality. But, it's called a love-hate relationship for a reason, and as much as I hate these things I'm still insanely in love with this because I enjoy making myself suffer or something. And you write so

[quarticpolynomi]

oh goodness, another influx of textually represented faces which i can never quite seem to accurately decipher.

firstly, before i address your points, i just want to preface this comments with the disclaimer that i heavily borrowed from margaret atwood whilst writing this story. "Eventually, they all die. This is the end of the story" is her wording, not mine. i merely re-purposed it. i am beginning to wonder whether i should have stated that a bit more precisely, but i am eager to clear up any possible misunderstandings; i would not dare take credit for something another author has done

[sven2ity]

LOL I love my textually represented faces. They allow me to be (symbolically) as loud and abrasive over the internet as I am in person ^-^

Sunggyu biased? Almost everything I have is Dongwoo...

[quarticpolynomi]

kim sunggyu is an extremely suggestive individual. he exudes a very attractive insecurity when he performs, and his own rapture in his musical experience is certainly catching. these pictures are glorious, thank you. my heart just flip-flopped unsteadily. i very much appreciate it.

i would, however, hesitate to call my writing "amazing". i am sure that there are far more technically skilled authors in fandom. i am gratified that my mediocre work has been enjoyable for more people than just reifica.

[mammothcock]

flawlessly executed! i am at a loss for words, as is my usual state when i read your works, so, uh. this was captivating!

[quarticpolynomi]

thank you very much, then, as per usual. i am sincerely touched by your approval.

[grapefruitade]

omg. omg.
let me just spot this because it's 1AM and i want to type up an eloquent (or as eloquent as i can get) comment that expresses all my feelings.
i shall return *__*

okay, here is my attempt at being eloquent...

[grapefruitade]

first of all...
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i don't know whether to cry tears of sadness or tears of joy. frankly, your statement of:
For a happy ending, try A.was very misleading. reading through all the scenarios that involved ending A in some way made me feel emotions that weren't happy at all; hahaha, i think the closest emotion would be apathy...? which is weird, because, it wasn't as if the different endings held zero emotion; contrary to that train of thought, the stories all held a lot of powerful, raw emotion that makes me speechless - even re-reading it now. but for some reason, i suppose, putting all those emotions together seems to give off a slightly apathetic feeling, mixed with a little bit of ache. does that make sense? sorry, i must sound ridiculously incoherent, hahaha

Re: okay, here is my attempt at being eloquent...

[quarticpolynomi]

i do believe that this habit of inserting typographically represented faces has become a trend. i think i enjoy it

Re: okay, here is my attempt at being eloquent...

[grapefruitade]

i'll try and add more "typographically represented faces" then, hahaha!
(￣▽￣)ノ

ah... reading your explanation, the last line makes a lot more sense than it did before. thank you for explaining; it's always a nice "easter egg" to know what the author's intentions were. ヽ( ´¬`)ﾉ

perhaps... oh my. now you're giving me hope, hahaha, that you will write such a story. (/u\)

you're welcome (and i'm thankful for your successful endeavors in writing such enjoyable stories) ♥♥♥