[infinite] the wavefunction collapse

[quarticpolynomi]

Title: the wavefunction collapse
Rating: pg-13
Word count: 3270
Summary: There are many ways that Hoya and Dongwoo could have had their happy ending.

Comments

[sven2ity]

I do believe I have a very intense love-hate relationship with this fic.

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I really love the way you write. So far, everything I've read by you has this really scientific format, to the point where the writing almost seems clinical-- but, the thing is, it's not. You portray emotions with an intensity that contrasts beautifully, and the end result is that instead of your writing coming off as objective, it just end up being very definite. That is, it has a very weighted feeling to it; a bitter sting of reality that cuts deep. Ffffff, I hope I'm making sense.

Oh wait! Perfect example:

Eventually, they all die. This is the end of the story.

It's such a biting statement, presented so straightforwardly, but it's trueWhich brings me to the hate part of this fic. I hate disbandment fics. I hate fics that make me think about reality. But, it's called a love-hate relationship for a reason, and as much as I hate these things I'm still insanely in love with this because I enjoy making myself suffer or something. And you write so

[quarticpolynomi]

oh goodness, another influx of textually represented faces which i can never quite seem to accurately decipher.

firstly, before i address your points, i just want to preface this comments with the disclaimer that i heavily borrowed from margaret atwood whilst writing this story. "Eventually, they all die. This is the end of the story" is her wording, not mine. i merely re-purposed it. i am beginning to wonder whether i should have stated that a bit more precisely, but i am eager to clear up any possible misunderstandings; i would not dare take credit for something another author has done

[sven2ity]

LOL I love my textually represented faces. They allow me to be (symbolically) as loud and abrasive over the internet as I am in person ^-^

Sunggyu biased? Almost everything I have is Dongwoo...

[quarticpolynomi]

kim sunggyu is an extremely suggestive individual. he exudes a very attractive insecurity when he performs, and his own rapture in his musical experience is certainly catching. these pictures are glorious, thank you. my heart just flip-flopped unsteadily. i very much appreciate it.

i would, however, hesitate to call my writing "amazing". i am sure that there are far more technically skilled authors in fandom. i am gratified that my mediocre work has been enjoyable for more people than just reifica.

[sven2ity]

guuuuurrl, if you don't stop with this "my writing is mediocre" nonsense I may feel the uncontrollable need to slap you (lull /shot )

But it is pretty strange how a majority of the greatest authors I've ever read seemed to have flocked to this one fandom 0.0 I guess Infinite is simply that amazing.

[quarticpolynomi]

my confidence in my mediocrity will ideally convince me to do my best at presenting a better narrative next time, though. thank you so much for the vote of confidence, though.