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quakewithfear

[Halloween Fics] - FIFTEEN

Oct 16, 2007 01:01

It all ended the day that Riku killed Roxas in the shallows of the sea.

The brothers Sora and Roxas had fought all the time as brothers are wont to do. But one day, their playful fighting became vicious and full of hatred. Words were said that could not be taken back and lines drawn in the sand of the beaches that they ( Read more... )

riku, kingdom hearts, dark month, au, roxas, fifteen, sora

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quakewithfear October 16 2007, 07:27:57 UTC

OH JEEZ. *HUGE BLUSH* I am SO sorry!! I didn't think that looked right, but I thought I checked and it said cangzi instead! *fixes right now* I wanted to be sure to do an extra good one for you since you always leave such nice comments.

*is dumb* Sorry!!

obtains October 16 2007, 10:12:39 UTC

very interesting idea

quakewithfear October 16 2007, 19:28:38 UTC

*laugh* Well I wasn't going for teh lawlz, but as long as you like it!

Btw, where is your icon from? It looks so familiar, but I might just be hallucinating.

obtains October 17 2007, 00:26:39 UTC

I knew you weren't, it's just me XD

Ah, it's from DOGS//Bullets and Carnage. One of the hardcore twins :D

quakewithfear October 17 2007, 05:55:46 UTC

OH! I've been wanting to read DOGS for AGES! Do you know where one can find it?

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kacfrog711 October 18 2007, 06:00:14 UTC

It took me a bit to get into this one, because of the stiff style (It takes me AGES to get into translated Greek stuff x_x), but by the end, I really, really liked the idea, and the emotion, and the imagery. Poor Sora, and sexy!Riku, and the scene of Roxas dying in the sunrise in the water on the beach is just..... total cinematic Guh. Absolutely gorgeous. <3

quakewithfear October 18 2007, 07:13:14 UTC

Thank you! It was kind of an experiment in getting across emotion and plot without using dialogue or being overly wordy. I guess it did have a "stiff" style, but I didn't even think about epic poetry until you mentioned it! ^_^ Maybe that's what I was going for unconsciously. (I love epic poetry ^^;;)

^_^ You always write such sexy comments. I look forward to them.

kacfrog711 October 18 2007, 07:58:13 UTC

Yeah, it definitely had an epic poetry feel; probably the connotation of "halcyon" did it to you. ....Or me. >>;

Well, you know. Keep writing sexy things, and you'll keep getting sexy comments. <3

quakewithfear October 18 2007, 08:16:25 UTC

XDXD I haven't forgotten it either! How could I POSSIBLY forget it? It only EATS AT MY BRAIN ALL THE TIME. November is XIII Ghosts and BA and maybe if I'm feeling OUTRAGEOUSLY productive, I'll even updated HBRC, but let's not get crazy here.

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