[Halloween Fics] - FIFTEEN

[quakewithfear]

            It all ended the day that Riku killed Roxas in the shallows of the sea.

The brothers Sora and Roxas had fought all the time as brothers are wont to do.  But one day, their playful fighting became vicious and full of hatred.  Words were said that could not be taken back and lines drawn in the sand of the beaches that they

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[kacfrog711]

It took me a bit to get into this one, because of the stiff style (It takes me AGES to get into translated Greek stuff x_x), but by the end, I really, really liked the idea, and the emotion, and the imagery. Poor Sora, and sexy!Riku, and the scene of Roxas dying in the sunrise in the water on the beach is just..... total cinematic Guh. Absolutely gorgeous. <3

[quakewithfear]

Thank you! It was kind of an experiment in getting across emotion and plot without using dialogue or being overly wordy. I guess it did have a "stiff" style, but I didn't even think about epic poetry until you mentioned it! ^_^ Maybe that's what I was going for unconsciously. (I love epic poetry ^^;;)

^_^ You always write such sexy comments. I look forward to them.

[kacfrog711]

Yeah, it definitely had an epic poetry feel; probably the connotation of "halcyon" did it to you. ....Or me. >>;

Well, you know. Keep writing sexy things, and you'll keep getting sexy comments. <3

[quakewithfear]

XDXD I haven't forgotten it either! How could I POSSIBLY forget it? It only EATS AT MY BRAIN ALL THE TIME. November is XIII Ghosts and BA and maybe if I'm feeling OUTRAGEOUSLY productive, I'll even updated HBRC, but let's not get crazy here.

[kacfrog711]

Hey, November is NANOWRIMO, right? So you could just put that count towards getting various KH fics done. <3 Your fangirls certainly wouldn't complain. :3

[quakewithfear]

Actually, I know from experience that I will be WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY too tired after writing a fic a day for 31 days to think about trying to write a few thousand words a day for another 30. Although it's a good idea, really... And I have been meaning to push myself more. I'll give it some thought.

Although I should really, like, work on original stuff at some point too. Maybe JaNoWriMo!

[kacfrog711]

Yeah, amen to that. x_x November needs to be a recovery month, not project month. January sounds good.... but, then, it might just sound good because it's far away. X3;