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quakewithfear

[Halloween Fics] - TWENTY-NINE

Nov 03, 2006 03:55

Yep, I told you guys I'd write them all eventually! I was planning on doing 'em in order, but then this came along and, uh.... yeah. You'll see what I mean. I had Anti-Sora form slated for twenty-nine and it simply wouldn't wait.

Title: Twenty-Nine
Author: Xanthos Samurai
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts II
Pairing/Characters: Anti-Sora/Saix (Yes, you ( Read more... )

anti-sora, kingdom hearts, twenty-nine, dark month, anti-sora/saix, saix

Comments 12

moonbladeangel November 3 2006, 10:43:17 UTC

Ooo very cool, I hope you expand on this :)

quakewithfear November 4 2006, 07:33:51 UTC

*laugh* I hope to revisit it at one point when it's not 4 AM and I'm conscious. I'm glad that you liked the concept!

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quakewithfear November 4 2006, 07:38:21 UTC

XD;; I can write better, I promise. But thank you for the comment!

kacfrog711 November 3 2006, 14:18:29 UTC

I'm sorry, but when I read "smelt," all I could think of was some crack comic someone drew with the Wicked Witch of the west saying, "I'm sme~lting!" ^^;; Dictionary.com says you can use either "smelt" or "smelled," but as a personal preference, I would go with the latter (as I would with "dream," where I'd use the past tense "dreamed," unless there was a "have," in which case I'd use "dreamt"). But either is acceptable, and that's just my wacky associations. XD; So keep it if it reads naturally to you ( ... )

quakewithfear November 5 2006, 21:07:43 UTC

*laugh* I really need to give you a "best beta ever" gift just to show you how much I appreciate you actually giving me honest and thorough crit. ^^;; On the other hand, I need to learn to not post things that I write at 4 AM without first going back and editing them when I'm lucid.

I'll go back and edit this fic and use your suggestions to hopefully write another, better fic with this pairing since I'm suddenly so very fond of it. ^^;; "A werewolf and a black cat" indeed. That was almost exactly what I was going for, even though I hadn't thought about it consciously. I'll see what I can do about putting Saix at an advantage next time.

I was worried about writing Anti-Sora since I know he's one of your favorites, but I'm glad you like how he turned out!

theinfernaldoll November 3 2006, 19:38:04 UTC

^_^ I'm glad I get to read the end. Lovely - I hope you're going to come back to this one at some point later in November, too!

quakewithfear November 5 2006, 04:28:27 UTC

^_^;; I might... along with certain other crackish pairings that we've discussed...

wickedorin November 4 2006, 02:31:58 UTC

Wrong in a good way. A real good way.

quakewithfear November 4 2006, 20:02:10 UTC

*grin* My favorite kind of compliment. Thank you!