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Great Plains High School AU: Chapter Four

Feb 24, 2013 12:55

Savin frowned to himself, pushing his glasses up the bridge of his nose. He glanced at his home ec partner, Dylan. Dylan just raised an eyebrow at him, giving Savin a quizzical look. “What’s up?”

( 'Nothing.' )

member: theun4givables, character: wes, rating: r, character: jazz, character: devin, character: dylan, character: savin

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alien_writings February 24 2013, 18:34:22 UTC

Haha, you know what? We need Official Icons for the AU. It's too loleriffic NOT to have official icons ( ... )

theun4givables February 24 2013, 18:55:29 UTC

lol, icons would be awesome.

Savin probably could beat Wes if Wes weren't handed an awesome partner AND if Dylan weren't Savin's, lol. Savin's very, very competitive. And lol, Sarah mentioned that about Devin.

lol, it's not. I don't think Savin thought of it as a date, but he did want to use it as an excuse to get to know Jazz a little better. Kinda. lol

I think Jazz is actually about to figure it out because I don't think he can really be in denial that much longer. Whether he remains in denial about Savin feeling the same is a totally different story. ;)

n3m3sis42 February 24 2013, 22:34:23 UTC

Savin wants to believe he could beat Wes, but I'm not so sure. Wes is pretty Agreeable. Too bad they can't have a one-on-one cook off and settle this once and for all.

theun4givables February 24 2013, 23:19:25 UTC

I think Savin's so damn competitive that he probably would find a way to beat Wes, just once. At least once. lololol. That's just how he is.

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n3m3sis42 February 24 2013, 22:39:53 UTC

I enjoyed this chapter. You did a better job with it than I would've. I'm amused by Wes's ability to cook and ogle boys at the same time (he's very talented at both!), Devin's INability to do, well, anything useful, and Savin's totally smooth moves. And whoops, looks like Dylan's inherited his mom's abilities in the kitchen.

Awwww, Jazz and Savin are cute. Too bad Dylan can't clue Jazz in on why he feels all weird whenever Savin looks at him, haha.

theun4givables February 24 2013, 23:18:14 UTC

Aw, are you sure about that? lol I just loved this whole chapter. It's very carefree compared to, say, what I'm writing now. It was fun to get to do this chapter. :)

They are cute. Ugh, you two. Stop that. Also, I think Jazz is figuring that out soon, himself. But there will still be a conversation between him and Dylan lolol.