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Savin+Egan fic - Best Party Ever

Feb 05, 2013 09:15

So I couldn't resist giving Savin the satisfaction of punching Egan in the face. Not sure when it takes place but it's months into the AU

Okay, this party of Xan’s? Much better than I expected it to be. The music’s alright and there are plenty of people here. Easy enough to blend into the crowd and try and enjoy myself for once.

( *Especially* since I have a glass of vodka in my hands. )

member: theun4givables, character: egan, rating: r, character: savin

Comments 2

n3m3sis43 February 8 2013, 04:17:40 UTC

Lololol I love that Dylan dresses more or less like a Zimaran plaything even though he's not on Zimara. :D

And all I can say is I'm impressed that you went into this with the idea of this story arc being way more lighthearted than it rightfully ended up being and still wrote it so accurately. Like, this feels like how a rape/abuse victim might feel and act.

I was proud of Savin for faking Egan out the way he did. And having him hurting his hand while punching him feels totally right. Brave but still wussy.

Nicely done.

theun4givables February 8 2013, 04:27:41 UTC

This was based on alien's idea that Dylan would be wearing something revealing and Jazz would have gone disguised as a girl and the two seeing each other and being like WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WEARING??? lolol

Yeah, I'm glad for that. Savin really took this piece over and guided me through how he would have felt through this. I'm glad he did that, lol.

I am, tooooo. BB needed that.

Thanks. :)