walking in the snow (drabble)

[qiguai]

This is one of the last drabbles for my Yen-J lyrics challenge! There are two more F.Cuz drabbles coming, but this one was long enough I felt it appropriate to post it by itself.

walking in the snow
f.cuz, seunghyun/younghak, pg, 980w

Comments

[trappedintaipei]

WHY DO YOU MEAN /WE/ I NEVER DO THIS.

[countrymir]

this is the first post leave fic i've read and well, i think its fits perfectly. it's bitter and it had started off so sweet and just neutral that it could have gone in any real direction. i think you did an amazing job on dialogue too. their dialogue alone is the fic and it managed to stand out pretty damn well because it alone gave all of the real story line. idk if i'm making sense :/

[trappedintaipei]

I don't normally like reactionary fic but I couldn't stop thinking about the two of them trying to carry on a relationship and then breaking up. ): It hurts my heart so bad.

[samfrack]

So sad and beautiful. I love the way the story flows and all the details. My OTP breaks up T__T It's a good winter story even if bittersweet, though I tend to like the bittersweet onces more.

[trappedintaipei]

Thanks so much! The snow was a detail I added at the last minute, and I'm glad to see it worked well. :)

[yeomin]

I'm not really good with comments, especially when I try to type down what i feel. but I couldn't not comment, because this is a perfect story.
It's really easy to imagine this happening in real life, because I always wonder what/how they are now. And this just fills up the blank spaces for me. Even though this probably isn't reality, it still brings some peace to my fangirl heart.
this really is a perfect 'aftermath' story, you've done a brilliant job writing this ♥

[trappedintaipei]

In my delusional little head, I like to think that they'd stay together. ♥ Haha, but really, thank you so much. :) This comment is so sweet.

[unactivist]

SWEET BABY JESUS

I was really looking forward to fluff, Amy, thanks. :| But, omg, you're fantastic. As always.