Can't

Sep 11, 2005 18:07

Author: trickster_
Dare: What happened to Brian and Justin if Babylon never exploded.
Warning/Rating: Spoilers for S5.

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equusentric September 12 2005, 20:42:14 UTC
He would have said it. He would have said it and he would have meant it.

*WAILS*

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cempakasari September 12 2005, 21:17:07 UTC
You should add the It was just that he couldn't.

Frankly, this is what I envisioned the end to be. Bittersweet though it may be, but more believable than the engagement/wedding/manor house arc.

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damietta September 12 2005, 23:56:46 UTC
Ah, bittersweet is right. So in character for everyone. It mades me wonder though if Brian would stay in Pittsburgh, too. Not go to New York, but with all his friends against him and he not being happy, I wonder if he'd branch Kinnetic out to say, Chicago.

This story gave great "food for thought".

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vedaprophet September 13 2005, 19:19:10 UTC
i cannot cope with how fucking much i love this story. I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY. FUCKING. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. IT.

OMFG. brilliant. just fucking brilliant!!

at the end of reading this, that song 2 Rights Make 1 Wrong (that played at the end of 511) started playing, and i SO started bawling my fucking eyes out!!!

no guesses, but whoever wrote this ROCKS. THE END.

bwah, and perfect characterization for EVERY character you wrote in this too. like this:

Emmett raised an eyebrow. "What's he celebrating, one million customers served?"

i just...i have no words for how much i love this story!! :x:x:x

*angsts for b/j* *sighs contentedly*

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equusentric September 13 2005, 20:57:41 UTC
From the angst, I'm guessing trickster.

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sherebis September 14 2005, 03:27:50 UTC
waaaaah!!!!

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